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jonas_karel3dCommentedAs Christopher departed, he silently vowed revenge, plotting to make Iron Man pay for the disrespect he had received. The Marvel world, rich in talent, offered numerous alternatives, and Christopher was determined to find the right alliance to achieve his goals.- jonas_karel4dReplied to Mattex97
a short knife but yes
A long sword lay beside the man but Sauron ignored it for now. - jonas_karel4dReplied to Mattex97
it's a acient corpse. In his time Valyrian steel was rare, and just invented. at least that is the case for my fanfic
The armour of the men had all but rotted away only small parts of iron were left behind. - jonas_karel4dReplied to Mattex97
it is his official height in lotr. But he is a immortal shapeshifter so it's not gonna be a problem.
And he stood at a staggering height of 9ft2 or 2,8 m - jonas_karel7dReplied to Rowen_KunCh 78 Chapter 78 - Red Menace [4]
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that is a perfectly missed change for the A-Team
"Jean, get the A-men ready, it's time for their first mission." He said with a straight face. - jonas_karel17dCommentedCh 27 Carnage
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i see this working
I am not worried about Velzard much but rather of Milim but I have just the super weapon that will put Milim to my side...should I troll her? Let's put a super-magisteel trampoline with a M for Milim and bait her on landing there...let's see how far she goes heheh.. - jonas_karel23dCommented
wasn't Mercury the Roman equivalent of Hermes?
I only gave him some pointers about where to invest, what areas to look into, and some of the future losses the market will face. This, coupled with my track record of only investing in projects in which I knew I would get a great return, had my uncle thinking I was the second coming of Mercury or something. - jonas_karel29dCommentedCh 98 Pijal City
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and Durins bane after Gandalf defeats him
Narzug listened attentively and felt the excitement growing within him. He knew that this was the key to his ultimate power. But he also knew that he had to find the right creature to gain the greatest possible power. - jonas_karel1mthReplied to Maximus_DukeCh 3 back to middle earth
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nah but in china you would be hanging for even thinking differently than the great communist pooh bear. let alone get your credit score would definitely be lowered they see everything over there
As for whether he would be hung from a lamppost for this "conscience," Russell wasn't concerned at all. In the United States, where capital reigns, it's unrealistic to think a "conscience-filled" capitalist would be hanged. - jonas_karel1mthCommentedCh 102 Chapter 102: A Visit to Duén Canell
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is it possible to include the names and description of some of the scp's when introducing them. it's hard to follow otherwise like with scp 1555 until this chapter I have no idea what it is haven't read through the full chapter yet but it would be much appreciated if a short summary would be added for every scp either new marvel ones or old ones
Ch 11 Enter Bruce Banner. -10 - jonas_karel3mthReplied to GloryOfTheDark
thanks for all the input I have dislectia myself so these kinds of mistakes will probably keep on happening because I write it as I hear it so if you find another spelling mistake please point it out I will do my best to correct it.
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yeah that's my fault put down the word for baby in my mother language i will fix it
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yeah a friend of mine said the same. I tried to do it for the old chapters but it is possible I missed some I will go over them again tomorrow
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thank you for the input you are right. i changed the storyline a bit concerning the nanobots so it is not important anymore i shall remove it
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