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It me,Facez. I love to review many,many novels, fanfics and support many Authors that create a lot of story that we enjoyed and probably bad mouth on a story that irk with some stupid logic,instead u can just go tell me 'It plot armor' that work ya know!? and if that story is good and I myself like it I will draw fanart for u!! it good!?
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Facez_16hCommentedCh 33 [32] Kesseki High (2)- Facez_1dCommentedCh 10 Welcome to the Academy
- Facez_1dCommentedCh 10 Welcome to the Academy
- Facez_1dCommentedCh 9 Detailed Curriculum
- Facez_1dCommentedCh 8 DOMS & Theories
- Facez_1dCommentedCh 32 [32] Kesseki High (1)
- Facez_23dCommentedCh 22 [22] Tempest
- Facez_24dCommentedCh 28 Chapter Twenty Eight- Running From A Tanuki Part 2
- Facez_27dCommentedCh 1 [1] Talent System
- Facez_27dCommented
it mean?
[Talent: Natural Ambidextrous] - Facez_28dCommented
i think u introduce teams play too soon. in the beginning I just want to know more about MC, how he be this strong,what he have that make him MC of this story,what set him apart form the rest players. and romantic relationships too, I thought u would build some soil posanality of the characters before progress to a romantic arc or something
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give it more details in fighting scenes bro, u wrote it like aftermath of battle instead of some action
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more!
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Thx for the chapter
This book has been deleted. - Facez_1mthReplied to Darkness_Enjoyer
he starts to babysit Ethan and basically goes with the flows of the story. he knows there is more of a demons contacter in school yet he is not doing anything to bring them out at all. he just waits for the opportunity to come instead of making one and when someone gonna try to attack him directly or indirectly he just standing there doing nothing to 'gather more information ' like in the mine arc. he just leave the seeds of problems alone. and recently u focus on romantic relationships with many girls but with the way u make mc posanality composed, introvert want to be alone,don't care about how people's think of him. it just ruin story bro
Ch 354 Chapter 82.3 - What the heart sees - Facez_1mthCommentedCh 354 Chapter 82.3 - What the heart sees
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- Facez_2mthReplied to Lee_00
because Maya treated him the way his dear sister does so it doesn't count bro. and he became more open in volume 2 or 3. every character got their personalities,not like some novel that basically forced Extra to become a star in one night. The one,only downside is that he is hiding his ability and he rather chooses to use indirect methods in some cases and original MC or whoever came get his credit,yeah I hate it alright! BUT I understand the way of his thinking. his ultimate goal is REVENGE so he'll use everything to achieve that like, hiding his abilities but not so suspicious it not those novels MC's that just want to hide their power for punny reasons so I told u. give it a try bro.
- Facez_2mthCommented
It's just a gamer system boi. u system don't have anything unique
The system is really powerful, just seeing my knowledge increase like in a game, as well as time limited learning bonuses, made me want to study and learn...' I thought surprised. I thought, surprised. - Facez_2mthCommentedCh 2 02 - Change