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it's fun so far but she us so stupid
This review is based on first five chapters only. Writing wise, it's good and so is the stability of updates. The world development so far is well average but it's alright considering its just the initial few chapters. My only issue is the progression of the plot and character of the mc. I honestly don't see any depth in him. The first five chapters also felt slow and bland. What I am saying is I don't see a hook that makes me want to read further. (But I am pretty picky of what I read so that's that.) Overall, this has big potential. Good luck, author.
for 30+ chaps? weird. :(
So far it's better than most wn stuff I have read. (Not that I have read many) but sentences break after , makes it feel off. eh just being nitpicky.
There may be explicit description of nudity. (only when required obviously.) As for sex, no, I won't go in its details. In short, this is not a smut novel. Try reading a few chapters though. I am confident that they will hook you to read further. :)
It's a disease. It will make sense later on.
manipulative doesn't mean evil but glad you liked it.
More like greed
As a reader, I always believe that a story can only be called a 'story' as long as the characters struggle in it. When they struggle to achieve their goals, to beat their enemies, to defy their fates, clearing the obstacles then becomes more satisfying. So here we are. In this webnovel, you will find the following things: - A fun main character who actually thinks. - No random, unnecessary, overpowered level-ups. I don't like it. - Harem? Yes, but it won't be 1000 women in 10 chapters. I will give depth to every major character, so obviously the numbers won't reach a million or whatnot. And more importantly, my target is to go with the flow and not force things. - No NTR, yuri, etc., in the harem. I'll try my best to execute my ideas, so I hope all my readers will support me. Have fun reading! Also, feel free to ask questions in the comments. You can also join the Discord server.
Bro fcked his mom >.<
... feels forced. Unless the king and higher department were also against this dude and needed an excuse to off him.
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