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TheOneWhoRizzled4dCommentedyou know that's not how divinity works in tensura right? Having divinity doesn't technically make you a real "God"
I've already decided not to get too into the government and politics stuff and instead more into religion, which shouldn't be too hard, all I have to do is say I'm part divine spirit and that I have divinity and boom, we can make a religion out of it.- TheOneWhoRizzled8dReplied to AZI_Khan
I understand, believe me, but if you continue constructive criticism is a good thing, but the way you are going about it, it's more like you are telling the Author what he should do, and by doing that it may end up derailing the story, annoying him, stressing him or killing his motivation.
Ch 3 Waking world. - TheOneWhoRizzled12dCommentedCh 65 Chapter 65 The Swordsmanship of One Piece
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a manga, this one "Deatte 5 Byou De Battle"
Rayleigh did his best to stop himself from laughing before Wild King was out of ear shot. Yes, Wild King's debt of the Nen and Force lessons was paid, but after their fight, Rayleigh had spared WIld King's life, which was a far greater debt. If Wild King had just accepted Rayleigh's terms at the start, this would not have happened, but since he rejected Rayleigh's kindness, the debt would only increase. - TheOneWhoRizzled14dCommented
And Drake took that serious
Ren chuckled inwardly and then said, "What can I do, didn't Lu Xun say that daughters are their father's past lovers?" - TheOneWhoRizzled14dCommentedCh 64 Chapter 64 The Sea King Tide
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jiraya: *_*:
Konoha army gathered at Tanzaku at this news all packed their stuff and under the leadership of Sakumo, Tsunade, Kazuki and Orochimaru departed back towards the village. - TheOneWhoRizzled24dReplied to Jekyll_et_Hyde
I... I have concerns...
Why did BB look at her when saying pest? - TheOneWhoRizzled29dCommented
No, lightning is the only way
"Mother of fortune, 1,000 Gold for one tiny pill?! If I want to earn money quickly, it seems like becoming an Alchemist is the only way!" Yuan's interest in alchemy was piqued. He thought that if one day he has a chance to learn alchemy, he would definitely give it a try. - TheOneWhoRizzled1mthCommentedCh 505 Chapter 457 Part 2
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Relinquish thy belongings instantaneously!
"Take me to Gilles and I'll act like you didn't just go London NPC on me." Nicholas shrugged his hands, "I'm pretty sure none of y'all actually wanna be fighting for a child rapist." - TheOneWhoRizzled2mthCommented
Billy and Bully McGuire, Same person, two faces. Sometimes he likes to switch up.
"I wonder what Adonis would think if he saw you like this. The great Billy, righteous Grand Knight, is no more than a bully." - TheOneWhoRizzled2mthCommented
Law from OP
Also about the next template please share your ideas, I'll prefer characters who are not too overpowered to destroy the power balance and kinda match the first template. - TheOneWhoRizzled2mthCommented
I love the fact that essences are getting mainstream on Webnovel
Essence of the Immortal: - TheOneWhoRizzled2mthCommented
Bro is mewing too hard
Nearly everyone at the table had been in a similar situation to the one Wonder Woman described with Cheetah. Her words received a round of solemn nods. Except for from Martian Manhunter. Who was still completely unmoving in his seat. - TheOneWhoRizzled2mthCommentedCh 17 Chapter Seventeen.
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