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Review Detail of Oji_san_ecchi in One Piece: The Strongest Swordsman

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Oji_san_ecchi
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Your novel is weird. It's like telling a story of a mother who doesn't like hurting living beings. In the world of One Piece, having such a nature is not good, you stupid writer. A bad novel with other silly MC traits.

One Piece: The Strongest Swordsman

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Lemao_Enamsembilan
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So far, this story is not my liking either. But I think a hentai fanfiction with sex system will suit you better just like your name.

DaoistCkdsB0
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it is consistent with yoriichi's personality.

Oji_san_ecchi
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Yeah, but still, that's very annoying.

DaoistCkdsB0:it is consistent with yoriichi's personality.
DaoistCkdsB0
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well to each his own. i just don't want his persona to change drastically without any reason.

Oji_san_ecchi:Yeah, but still, that's very annoying.
PRIMORDIAL_09
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don't u think ur going too overboard with ur comment, after all there is something called character development and we all know what type of character does yoriichi has! the novel only has 21 chapters till now so have patience otherwise read Chinese novels who don't care about their character development from the first chapter!

Horus_1998
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Your comment would be valid if the protagonist had not been sold into slavery by his own father and then trained for 10 years by one of the strongest characters in One Piece, literally the MC lacks common sense

PRIMORDIAL_09:don't u think ur going too overboard with ur comment, after all there is something called character development and we all know what type of character does yoriichi has! the novel only has 21 chapters till now so have patience otherwise read Chinese novels who don't care about their character development from the first chapter!
PRIMORDIAL_09
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well now that I rethink about it your probably right.

Horus_1998:Your comment would be valid if the protagonist had not been sold into slavery by his own father and then trained for 10 years by one of the strongest characters in One Piece, literally the MC lacks common sense