will try thank you

dude I have no idea who these people are anymore. none.

ahhh i see. now I understand the problem. you think what u want matters to us. well it doesn't not get back at your desk and start writing. we don't got time for ur dreams and needs. now get to work j/k........ well not really

dude doesn't let logic dictate his story. I mean he's said this competition was in a week and then let like a moth go by. nothing makes sense

this isn't the first bad Grammer of this chapter. I'm too lazy to flag everyone of them.

so we being told this again. yay

when the author isn't boring us with overly technical fighting stuff he can write really well.

Arthur san can u change title? title doesn't fit chapter. chapter is about how dude feels lesser how is that don't mess with Gordon's? or what? they will have a pity party? see title doesn't fit

ugh I hate this kind of suspense author is doing. the whole u all think this is a fight when really I entered code into computer secretly mua ha ha type of suspense sucks. by the way I know it's not going to be a code into a computer or anything like that that was just an example

i wish u would make up your mind about his personality. he can't be a super cool assassin that even if we say his whole life was him just being abused but was somehow still innocence eyes of youth there's no way a guy could be a top assassin and be that inept. I mean how could he infiltrate a party? I mean one girl flirting with him at the party would turn him into a creeper. I will objectively say it would kind of make sense that mom would want daughter to hook up with strongest male that could lead their guild I think it makes sense on paper but your execution of it makes it come off cringy and a very gutteral part of me is like nope but I know logically it makes sense just the way u word it. I'm not trying to be mean I'm giving u my honest opinion because I like story just parts of it are bad

what is the point of this? it wasn't funny.

this chapter almost made me want to drop novel it was so stupid

author the more he uses shadow walk can u explain to me why the govt wouldn't feed him shadow cores to use his ability? or why didn't he get f ranks stones he couldn't eat and exchange for shadow himself?

dmn I'm reading this on day after xmas

that's the standard

why do u jump from perceptives like that? u were at first describing stuff as mc looks at it and then u are like a figure jumps out. that's usually used at beginning of a chapter. there's no point in doing it that way

maybe u should call this something else?

u could of included something like "despite being an ability user with weak ability he was still stronger than normal humans

dude why are u arguing with people like that? even the best masterpiece is criticized harshly. if it doesn't apply let it fly . why spoil ur own book for someone who probably won't stuck around?

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