PurrPiTator
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PurrPiTator1mthCommentedThe first time I've seen the re-'birthing' process in written language. So that's new.
After hearing his cry, the midwife began to clean his body.- PurrPiTator1mthReplied to Jin_moon
Why not?
"It's so cold here," One of the students standing in the lines spoke out. - PurrPiTator1mthCommented
please make it stop
Fall and Rise - XIII - PurrPiTator1mthCommented
I would grade you C- for these last 3 sentences in particular.
Even while planning everything, Elena told Amelia she wouldn't mind if Damian was invited. - PurrPiTator1mthCommented
the name associated with a title is introduced at the earliest instance of their involvement. namely so readers know who ft is talking.
"I wasn't sure that our majesty would accept your conditions so easily," The Archduke said with a slight smile on his face. - PurrPiTator1mthCommented
why are you telling us about people you introduced 200 chapters ago like its the first time. why is asher still having a flashback about events he was not present for, which defies the definition of a flashback?
Asher gathered all the information about the Garcia Family with the help of Eric Herod, the son of the Head Butler of the Greville Family. - PurrPiTator1mthCommented
Did he finally get an editor? Why is Asher having flashbacks to outside of the academy where he is not involved and should not be capable of knowing the details of their conversations and activities? Where are the linebreaks and section markings to make determining what is happening and where less ambiguous? You did it before.
Ch 435 Fall and Rise - VI - PurrPiTator2mthCommentedCh 423 Trap of Memories VIII - Talent
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I want him to shut up and focus on the task at hand so badly it hurts. Stop repeating yourself.
At one moment he was standing in the fog, then he solved the riddle and met an unknown man whose power he couldn't measure, and the next moment he was stuck here. - PurrPiTator2mthCommented
Clearly, they are not a New Yorker.
"It's so cold here," One of the students standing in the lines spoke out. - PurrPiTator2mthReplied to PurrPiTator
Scratch that, I was struck with premature sadness.
However, this was unknown to others, and everyone, including Damian and Amelia, thought that Asher would find something beneficial in the Trials Ground. - PurrPiTator2mthCommented
This is literally just repeating the previous sentence but with more hot air. You're k!lling me.
However, this was unknown to others, and everyone, including Damian and Amelia, thought that Asher would find something beneficial in the Trials Ground. - PurrPiTator2mthCommented
This should be no later than the 3rd sentence in this section. Why is it DOWN HERE?! Please, I beseech you, hire an editor.
They were standing in the Outer Sector at 4 A.M in the morning, and it was still winter, and in the Flying Island, the temperature was much colder as well. - PurrPiTator2mthCommentedCh 32 COME, GENTLE KNIGHT - PART 2
- PurrPiTator2mthCommentedCh 28 NOT LIKE OTHER MEN - PART 2
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The duke n dutches* It wouldn't let me click on the previous paragraph fsr
Andre's body tensed as his hand made a move for his sword to prepare to defend Faye's life. Although he didn't want to kill his longtime friend, he'd had no choice if he threatened the duchess. Andre prayed silently, hoping the smithy wouldn't lose his temper because of Faye's aggressive attitude. - PurrPiTator2mthCommented
"Never have I been so..." "That's a shame. Maybe if you were called out on your unclean behavior more often, you wouldn't have become such a detestable wh*r*."
Baron Montgomery's face blanched at the situation. He quickly retrieved Alice and hushed her up with a warning glance before she could cause any further disturbance.