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Rishav_Saha_10962hCommentedwhy not let a shadow clone work on it?
"We'll have to do Hiruzen's work... Ugh, and I was going to set aside more time for training!.. Eh, what should I write about if we are talking about 5-6 year old children?"- Rishav_Saha_109614hReplied to Crabble
yeah its a rarity to find a fanfic with good character design!
- Puppy, do you have an idea of what you are talking about?! - Mito said in a rage. - Rishav_Saha_109616hCommented
umm the word you are looking for is resourcefulness
I am really impressed by how smart Ennozo is. He might be more of a prodigy than Kakashi in terms of cleverness. He has quick thinking and is good at analyzing. He also isn't an egotistical kid who would fight me in a one-on-one; he knows his limit and he knows the opponent. - Rishav_Saha_109616hCommented
umm danzo knew fuinjutsu right?
However, recruiting won't be easy since I currently lack the cursed tongue eradication seal. I've been striving to obtain the seal as it would be incredibly beneficial. With it, I wouldn't only need to recruit loyal ninjas but also individuals motivated solely by financial gain. - Rishav_Saha_109616hCommented
ummm eight inner gates, medical ninjutsu and extreme chakra control is an option!
I smiled. "I will try to find a way to solve this problem, as low chakra reserves will hinder your potential." - Rishav_Saha_109616hCommented
people usually don't have dual chakra natures, they have only a single element except for kekkei genkais, and kids usually have not tested their affinity yet (they don't do that in the academy). But having a single elemental affinity does not mean that you can't train the others, it is up to you to master all of them. Please revamp on the manga and anime sources.
"I have fire and lightning," answered Obito. - Rishav_Saha_109616hCommented
a gift?
"Obito?" - Rishav_Saha_109616hReplied to MrITookAnotherL
there's a saying that ideas transcend personality, and biases cannot be influenced if the said individual has prior opinion.
In truth, I don't have much expectation for this kid Ennozo. He's a character I have never heard of, but I can still make use of him as my test subject. However, if he did succeed in graduating early by the time Kakashi submits his early graduation, I will take him seriously. - Rishav_Saha_109617hReplied to MrITookAnotherL
the yuki and the kaguya have kekkei genkais ffs
The current camp of Konoha was in turmoil because the clan leader of one of the biggest clans in Konoha had been declared missing. Most clans declared him dead, while the Shimura clan members refused to believe that one of Konoha's elders and the leader of the Shimura clan was gone. In the end, with Orochimaru's order, a group was sent out of the camp to find the village elder, Shimura Danzo. The group consisted of 2 Jonins and 3 Chunins. Despite recent decrees on Jonin-level ninjas, two Jonins were still sent because the village elder was an important figure. - Rishav_Saha_109620hReplied to Mysteryon
well that's up to you, I have nothing to say!
He stood quite for a few seconds so i said "You can't? Well then you can't be my student, learn the Rasengan and i will take you as my student." - Rishav_Saha_10962dReplied to Mysteryon
he more talented than naruto.
He stood quite for a few seconds so i said "You can't? Well then you can't be my student, learn the Rasengan and i will take you as my student." - Rishav_Saha_10962dReplied to ShadowMonarch21
so both of them were holding back right? got it then. And naruto had all the tailoed beast's chakra within him, what did sasuke have except for the rinnegan? Give him tailed beast chakra like naruto and just watch him go boom boom!
Sasuke was definitely very strong, maybe even stronger than Naruto if he fought to his fullest but the problem was his Chakra, it was not like his reserves were not big or any thing, the problem was that he could not deactivate the Rinnegan and took a lot of Chakra to keep it active but when he first got the Rinnegan he could deactivate it during the Kaguya and Madara fight but he choose not to since he didn't want to get caught off guard but after he lost his hand after fighting Naruto he could not deactivate his Rinnegan he thought it might have something to do with his hand but choose not to get it back. - Rishav_Saha_10963dCommented
in a way kabuto is like a real ninja!
Sasuke's mouth twitched. Is this guy a family slave with three surnames? he thought. - Rishav_Saha_10964dCommented
I am really liking this line lol
Jiraiya snapped, "Orochimaru, you bastard!" - Rishav_Saha_10964dReplied to Raistlins_Ghost1
aahhh there might be certain reasons for his reluctance lol.
Like in the original story, he killed Gato for disrespecting Haku's dead body, before joining Haku in the afterlife. Team 7 waited for another week for the bridge to be completed before starting their return journey. - Rishav_Saha_10965dReplied to SwoleHaunter
yeah I am just saying that if he trains it, he might discover something which previously eluded him, and the cherry on top being regarded as a ninja proficient in all five elements, which has a nice ring to it lol
Yoshi looked at Fujin with an unconvinced expression and wondered, 'Was he really telling the truth? Oh well, it doesn't matter. He's still 16. That's not too old to start learning Medical Ninjutsu. I just hope that he doesn't get discouraged by the amount of books he'll have to memorize. Young ninjas don't like to do boring things like that.' - Rishav_Saha_10965dReplied to Random_exe
dude there has to be some plot armour for an mc, or the novel doesn't stand. But most of the characters sound realistic here, and think like ninjas. The mc also seems to be paranoid and robotic, which are ESSENTIAL components of being a ninja. He has little character development, cause he doesn't NEED it. He already had a fixed mentality from the start. He has plot knowledge and he was a damn adult before transmigrating. He is NEVER overconfident, he has completely established himself into the ninja frame, which we don't get to see in most stories. AND the cherry on top, he is not really loyal to the village or anyone for that matter, this is actually like a breath of fresh air to me, we see too many romance fics, will of fire fics and whatnot, but they seem really difficult to blend into from my perspective. I like this guy (Fujin); his cowardly antics appear comedic as well as practical, and the strength progress is more or less believable with the amount of training he puts in. Maybe watching his dedication and resolve, hiruzen puts an eye out for him. We can clearly see that he has developed a soft spot for him (Fujin), like Orochimaru and Danzo, you know! I like where this is going, cause you feel like you are reading about a ninja world, which is unique and has not been done before, but you do you I guess. And lastly, every human is sociopathic individually to an extent, and every ninja especially s-ranks have their own quirks, and Fujin is a pretty UNIQUE character. H e is not jolly, loveable, charismatic or whatnot but he is DIFFERENT, and that sets this fic apart for me. I really like the pacing, world building and characters. All of them match up well, as well as the au elements. This is not a shonen ir op fic and that makes me like it even more. Cause I have read a lot of them and they were all ridiculously underwhelming!
- Rishav_Saha_10965dCommented
umm if you don't mind me asking, why doesn't fujin perfect his water ninjutsu from hiruzen? I mean you do not require an affinity to master it right, it will just require more effort, but with guidance from the professor and shadow clones you can easily pull it within a month minimmum. I'm just saying cause having all five elements kinda gives you a sense of satisfaction you know? Like throw at me whatever you want, I can counter it. Just saying!
Yoshi looked at Fujin with an unconvinced expression and wondered, 'Was he really telling the truth? Oh well, it doesn't matter. He's still 16. That's not too old to start learning Medical Ninjutsu. I just hope that he doesn't get discouraged by the amount of books he'll have to memorize. Young ninjas don't like to do boring things like that.' - Rishav_Saha_10966dCommented
this fic is good if you can shut down your brain for some time lol
My training is going well but is becoming slower and slower; I think I will become a low Jounin and then graduate because maybe if I am at war, I will become stronger faster. - Rishav_Saha_10968dReplied to GuSannBR
umm no illusion and elementary clones were available.
After getting the rewards of the quest, I started searching for chunin I came across a battlefield where 5 ninjas of hagoromo where fighting 7 ninjas of Kaguya clan, all of them were stronger than genins and in their late teens, so I started doing handsigns like in the memory related to ninjutsu I cast fireball jutsu, it took them by surprise killing 2 and injuring another, I threw 2 shuriken one slightly missing my target but the second one changed its course which killed him after hearing the notification of system I ran away with all my speed while doing a clone jutsu to confuse them.