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Random_exe
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i am disappointed to be honest , but yh here we go : - as of right now updates seems ok -decent writing quality could use some improvements but good enough to be considered GOOD in webnovel . - nothing much to say about WB as it is a fancfic except some major/minor things like there being quite a few senju clan members in the village and some new wind jutsu i guess idk if there's more as i stopped reading pretty early in the genin arc or either i dont temember atm. - Now CD and SD , its terrible imo , like mc is a paranoid , cowardly , robotlike mf , i couldnt relate to nor could i get my self to like him no matter how i tried , let me give you an example , he is above average and i trying to not show his above average abilities as not to get danzo attention … like mate you are an orphane civilian with above average skills , nobody cares about yooh also he is stupid to think he could deceive experienceed NINJAs with his little acts , but do you know whats worst ? It actually bloody works on even the hokage supposedly the best shinobi there , like this is ridiculous to the highest degree . i just couldnt get my self to read past this nonsense , but if you dont mind any of this stated above then you would probably enjoy the fiction , yikes i guess really liked the story idea huh cant believe i spent a whole day reading , was so frustrated i hit the gym before writting this comment 💀💀

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

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Rishav_Saha_1096
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dude there has to be some plot armour for an mc, or the novel doesn't stand. But most of the characters sound realistic here, and think like ninjas. The mc also seems to be paranoid and robotic, which are ESSENTIAL components of being a ninja. He has little character development, cause he doesn't NEED it. He already had a fixed mentality from the start. He has plot knowledge and he was a damn adult before transmigrating. He is NEVER overconfident, he has completely established himself into the ninja frame, which we don't get to see in most stories. AND the cherry on top, he is not really loyal to the village or anyone for that matter, this is actually like a breath of fresh air to me, we see too many romance fics, will of fire fics and whatnot, but they seem really difficult to blend into from my perspective. I like this guy (Fujin); his cowardly antics appear comedic as well as practical, and the strength progress is more or less believable with the amount of training he puts in. Maybe watching his dedication and resolve, hiruzen puts an eye out for him. We can clearly see that he has developed a soft spot for him (Fujin), like Orochimaru and Danzo, you know! I like where this is going, cause you feel like you are reading about a ninja world, which is unique and has not been done before, but you do you I guess. And lastly, every human is sociopathic individually to an extent, and every ninja especially s-ranks have their own quirks, and Fujin is a pretty UNIQUE character. H e is not jolly, loveable, charismatic or whatnot but he is DIFFERENT, and that sets this fic apart for me. I really like the pacing, world building and characters. All of them match up well, as well as the au elements. This is not a shonen ir op fic and that makes me like it even more. Cause I have read a lot of them and they were all ridiculously underwhelming!

Lord_Azathoth
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Thanks

Random_exe
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you’re welcome

Lord_Azathoth:Thanks
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Interesting_Okay
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Read Naruto's light novels and about will of fire and you'll understand why it works.

Rishav_Saha_1096
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umm we get to know that the hokage pretty much knows 90% of his antics, but kind of develops a close relationship with him.

Random_exe
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Oh thats nice to know , didn’t read that far then, from where i stopped it just felt like alot of plot holes , but still there is his horrendous personality that is enough to keep me from going back to reading this

Rishav_Saha_1096:umm we get to know that the hokage pretty much knows 90% of his antics, but kind of develops a close relationship with him.