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pepero02mthReplied to TheDragonSlayerCh 3 The Royal Academy Of Silvara - Bandits!- pepero02mthCommented
In terms of plot, this is pretty interesting but the writing needs a lottt of improvement. Like, during dialogue there would be missing details or responses wouldn’t match what was said before. For example, sometimes someone would answer a question that wasn’t asked or bring up something random without even finishing the previous convo
Ch 3 The Royal Academy Of Silvara - Bandits! - pepero04mthPosted
Basically 20 chapters for a single day to go by in that world after the first 100 chapters and mc doesn’t have his first time until early 100s not to mention the repetitive use of words with incorrect connotations like “affirmative” even the overall writing is so cringy with horrible references I got second hand embarrassment so many times when reading. what makes this book worse is that there are so many chapters for the mc’s other personas I almost skipped 100 chapters for that alone. Don’t recommend so save your time
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Groomer 🤢
So Mary wanted to offer herself to me to fulfill her part, huh? Although I have a beautiful fiancée now, I never get laid and am still a pathetic virgin in both worlds! Sophia is still too young for that kind of thing. She must have been ripening for at least a year for me to harvest her bountiful fruit. - pepero04mthCommented
Can affirmative even be used in this context 😭
"Affirmative, mom!" - pepero04mthReplied to Nekomiko_succubus
wow…
Birth Control - allows the user to control their fertility. The user can also choose the gender and race(from one of their parents) for their offspring. Also get rid of the genetic disorders caused by inbreeding. - pepero04mthReplied to FTBanime69
craziest comment goes too… FTBanime69. No cuz fr wtaf is this 🤨
Birth Control - allows the user to control their fertility. The user can also choose the gender and race(from one of their parents) for their offspring. Also get rid of the genetic disorders caused by inbreeding.