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A_Dragon_Fantasy

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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy1mth
    Posted

    The first thing why we are here is for lemons 🍋 Writing = 😈 Plot = 😈 Mc = 😈 Character development = 😈 Mc's attitude, ego, thinking = 😈 ( he is genius when it come to making girl spread their legs )

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    The Lustful Young Master is Sinister!
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    Replied to FakeCultivator001

    You hate and biology r two different things. You said it's logical and reasonable. But it's more of fictional than the original.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5- Shopping (1)
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    Replied to FakeCultivator001

    1000 per chapter? I am talking about paragraph.

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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    Replied to FakeCultivator001

    I thought you were logical, if he is going to be powerful he needs to have testrone, either keep him V or have multiple. Monogamy will won't help at all, try hormones psychology.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5- Shopping (1)
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    Commented

    Seriously if you want to attract readers, try reading The Villain wants sect full of maidens, magic sect id beauties, seduce the master.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5- Shopping (1)
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    Commented

    Change the paragraph when different people speaks.

    Ch 4 Chapter 4- Guest (2)
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    Commented

    Bruh! It feels Ai. There should be a dialogue or exchange of words.

    As An Ling sat lost in thought, a man approached him respectfully, addressing him as "young master." With a heavy heart, the man revealed yet another troubling news - another worker had left, worsening the already fragile state of their workforce.
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    Commented

    It feels Ai proofread.

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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    Commented

    Try breaking the paragraphs, it's long and words with similar meanings are repeated.

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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    Commented

    Feels like Ai edited or modified.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1- Arrival
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    Commented

    Try reading experiment 731 for guidance, sometimes common sense is dumb because most people are dumb. I got it he is from modern world but, why would he feel regret about making other work.

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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    Commented

    Sensible concept 🤣🤣🤣 so, you are telling me you are in a he is in a mutim world where strong regimes, he decided to do nothing? Since you told me it's logical, I think you need to check the survival series of Bg and NNS, it is a survival series in jungle, either way it's same concept where you are in a dangerous place. The good thing about these series is, it's not scripted unlike wildlife exploration series. You would know how stupid the choice is not doing anything is.

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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 72 Taming A Bitch - A Nine Tailed Bitch
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 72 Taming A Bitch - A Nine Tailed Bitch
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy2mth
    Replied to GodOfDeath1999

    Volume 2 is shift in realm...volume 3 back

    Keke! See, how, I will tame your lover, you fucking old man...make sure watch as I cream pie the love of your life.
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy3mth
    Replied to Sabaroth_zarkiel

    Dropped☠️

    Ch 1 Ch-1; I became hated by heavens
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  • A_Dragon_Fantasy
    A_Dragon_Fantasy3mth
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    Ch 1 Ch-1; I became hated by heavens
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