Please keep josei she's just perfect for him because he's older then he let's on .

That was a dumb move of you, what's the killing mikoto when you spent 2 chapters about saving her life, you just lost yourself a reader.

This is cancer

I think the ending to the poem should be "you will find more then what you pargened for"

Shame on you no wonder I thought I read this before, this is a an exact copy of another webnovel, the only difference is the checkpoint ability, what a disappointment.

It was good at first now you fuched up like everyone dose to other novels . It was simple but you had to add so much information with no progress to the story itself, I recommend you rewrite the second chapter, do better because I still have hope for this , it has so much potential to be a ranked webnovel 👍.

She started training when she was 2 I mean 2!! and still she is so weak wtf!! Stop nerfing her , I am dropping this bye bye .

Boring sh*t ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Never read

Boring

You sound like someone who likes to be edged.

Chinese novels are cancer to my eyes, they have so many references that I don't understand, and I don't expect another to do the same .

It was good now it's not

The story for me ended in the first chapter unfortunately, after that it's just boring and unengaging.

It feels so vain and the character s have no depth whatsoever, you can do better then this .

Good but boring extremely so .

It feels like a dream, confusing and boring to read

It's too boring

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Your novel is simply exhausting to read.