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HeroDuT199816minReplied to W_D_3766Thanks, it will be edited in the rewrite.
His words, spoken with a measured cadence, carried a weight that transcended mere ceremony. "In adherence to the sacred doctrine of 'The Dragon has Three Heads,' my heir, heir to the legacy that courses through our veins, is destined to unite with my cherished daughter, Princess Rhaenyra Targaryen. Alongside her, he shall stand united with the luminous Lady Laena Velaryon, scion of one of our most steadfast alliances." Her stepson said, and he really pressed home the doctrine.- HeroDuT199811dReplied to The_Fallen_8344
Yeah, I know, oeps. Well, it will be edited out when my current reworking is there. But who knows, perhaps he is the true lord of tight pants.
Lord the Tights, - HeroDuT199814dReplied to BSK_Kappo
Well, Visenya, Aemon, and Lyanna aren't supposed around during that time.
"Yes, Kepa, I'm up for a flight," he said childishly. He and his mother had decided not to tell Baelon about his warging abilities just yet. They loved him and Visenya dearly but were unsure of his reaction. Knowing three of your most important people around you weren't supposed to be there would shock anybody, and as the Crown and Hand, his father had more than enough on his hands. - HeroDuT199814dReplied to cabooseiscool_1
Baelon did something that is quite common for babies born by c-section. I read it somewhere, they get fluids in longs, and it can be lethal, especially then.
Be vigilant, brother. The maesters hide more than they reveal, and the shadows of our family's history are darker than we can fathom. Aemon's fate, the mysteries surrounding Baelon's birth—they and Aemma's death demand scrutiny. I suspect a deeper conspiracy, a web of deceit that we must unravel together. - HeroDuT199815dReplied to Noctifer_05
Yeah, it was a throwback to that.
"So when you will return, accepting who you are is of paramount importance. You are a Targaryen, but you are also a Stark, the song of fire and fire. Be both in what comes next, and perhaps the winds of winter can change into a dream of spring." The voice spoke sternly. - HeroDuT199817dReplied to Ishinnn
Yeah, that is how I felt about writing it. Really icky.
"Thank you, brother," Visenya said, a small blush creeping up her cheeks. Her eyes looked at them, and he could see Aemma in them, the same ones Aemma had. Although the color was a dark purple, he visibly gulped at the sight. - HeroDuT199817dReplied to Ishak_Jimale
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- HeroDuT199817dReplied to cabooseiscool_1
Perhaps, but unfortunately, fourteen was normal, if not earlier, on the occasion when a would bleed for the first time. They were old enough to wed. A sad thing, really. I know, for example, that the first Tudor king's mother was thirteen when she gave birth to King Hendry VII Tudor.
"Viserys, I understand your reservations. Visenya is still a child, and the idea of a marriage at this moment may seem hasty. I propose that we make a betrothal agreement, but the actual marriage will not take place until she reaches her fourteenth nameday. This way, you have time to grieve for Aemma, and for Visenya to mature." His brother said, giving him some comfort. Six years; he would have the time. Even in that time, his brother could have children. - HeroDuT199817dReplied to cabooseiscool_1
I'm busy with a full rewrite at the moment as of now until chapter 6 has been rewritten. Thanks for reading the story anyways.
"Yes, brother, I have dealt with the city watch since my brother left. But I can't keep up the slack; they need a true commander. I say we permanently appoint one from the men of the watch itself. I already know the best replacement." He paused and looked at the master of laws. "The son of the Master of Laws. Ser Harwin Strong, I have tested him, and he is strong, holds authority, and has a good education. Thanks to our Master of Laws," he spoke, let someone try, and deny the proposition. - HeroDuT199818dReplied to OverlordBGs
Yeah, true; the actors are doing a great job so far.
Corlys Velaryon (107 A.C.) - HeroDuT199818dReplied to OverlordBGs
That's how Corlys looks in my head. I have nothing against the actor who plays him well; I just don't like how they look now. I prefer the Valyrian looks, and that is also something against the Targaryen's purple eyes. It's a shame they don't have those.
Corlys Velaryon (107 A.C.) - HeroDuT199818dReplied to Lucifer_Houston
I know that; I just put her age forward by a couple of years. So it's more in line with show ages. Alicent is still in 89. A.C.
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I agree I shall edit it out.
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- HeroDuT199827dReplied to IANDNUH
Well, in the books, he gathers an army to fight for his brother's claim.
This paragraph has been deleted. - HeroDuT199827dReplied to Draken_Phenix
It's not like Jon knew about how Aemma died, that she would be gutted like a fish. Also Lyanna was there, and because of her Aemma got a choice. Then again it would be weird if Aemon doesn't weird in a tourney partly organized for his wedding.
Ch 15 Chapter 14: Tourney of Heirs and Love - HeroDuT19981mthReplied to Jicenixe
Viserys is talking to Aemma.
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