sloppy writing

poor quality proofreading. I expected better for content behind a paywall

please no more flashback chapters

bro your pacing sucks. the last 3 chapter have been the exact same thing repeated again and again.

review coming up:if you're looking for something well written like 'I am the villian' or 'dukes eldest son escaped to the military', novels where the mc has normal human motives and thought processes while incorporating a not overly intrusive 'system', then look else because this novel is all the typical isekai and reincarnator tropes thrown into a blender. First, the MC has no defining personality and changes arbitrarily depending on the situation, not to mention that his perception of concepts and events are at odds with his backstory (fully grown man, reincarnated and keeps his memories yet acts like an adolescent)Next, the story writing and pacing lacks any tension build up or resolution. The fights and trials are uninvolved and lack any emotional payoff at the end. Details and subplots are introduced that do not add anything meaningful to the story and more often then not showcase the dissonance between how the MC should act (considering his backstory) and how he does (cringelord).Final note: 3/10. Not worth the read but hopefully the writer learns from this project and improves his next work.

starts okay but during the tournament arc the MC goes brain dead. If you're looking for consistent action and attitude from a MC, go elsewhere. For a novel that makes references to how cringe most isekai stories are, the author makes all the same mistakes and packs in the tropes.

starts okay but around chapter 50 The quality goes way downhill with way too many intertwining plots

1st handful of chapters are good but then the editing becomes hot garbage. If this was a free mtl I'd chalk it up to business as usual but I'm not paying money for half ass work.

the MC isn't reincarnated as the big bad, he comes back as the cuck

I was not prepared for how slowly this story meanders on.

The writing isn't bad, actual brand names are used instead of chinglish alternatives but the MC is such a freaking loser with strung along character development

I came for SL: Beru's Side Story, I got bottom tier isekai

low quality writing. narrative dissonance with character backstory/history vs actions.

trash tier writing. apathetic adult acts like a melodramatic teen after reincarnation. really?

flashback arc/chapters suck.