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Knowing the author, I'm 100% sure there is. Though, he'll probably pull another non-blood related card here later.
Author could have pushed this to 500 chapters at least by completing the reunion with other girls, but I guess that's fine if the author wants to end, it's really abrupt though, and I was even excited by the sudden two chapter release. I hope your next novel will be better, good luck man.
Despite the very abrupt time skip, things are progressing pretty decent, I guess? I do hope the author can get to the main parts already in the next chapter or two, instead of wasting more time in this kind of scenes. There are still a lot left to the main plot, with the independent dimensions and all, as well as the gods of their world. There's also that foreshadowed scene about the gathering/meeting of the werewolf and vampire, which I assume is scrapped now with this timeskip. That was honestly quite a wasted potential, it was a great chance to know more about them.
wuhh??
It feels like the author can't decide how to progress properly and keeps repeating the same plot with minor changes over and over, it's getting tedious. There's also the fact that nearly every chapter is plagued with the status window which is something I've ignored for quite a while now as I don't want to accuse the author of anything regarding this but I can't help but find it very tedious to read as some info there barely matters, at least in most cases. Overall, I appreciate the author for the attention to details as a fan of hard fantasy, unfortunately however, I cannot find any other pros. There are a lot of cons, however, like I said the status windows is too repetitive and tedious. The dialogues are too long, there are various other methods that can make it more engaging, especially on info dumps, however I didn't see any improvement. Another is the authors's poor ways of valuing characters, the arcs where time is either skipped or regressed made many characters pointless and irrelevant to the story, or maybe they were just forgotten?
Author please avoid confusing pronouns, sometimes it might become confusing to us as well. In this case, the guy was already mentioned in the earlier line so the mistake was noticed immediately but I've seen it become a problem in the past chapters.
I disagree and agree with the other comments at the same time. Arthur's growth is only possible with he help of his aunt, shes's like his stopper, someone who can stand on the same level as him, someone who can correct him when does something wrong, and someone who can guide him on the right path, that's why Arthur should definitely have a certain attitude or shift of personality when interacting with her.But like I said, I also agree with them, not because I dislike the point that the author wanted to show us but because it is written pretty poorly. Firstly, it is too descriptive, Arthur's feelings that is, to the point that it made it seem like his personality became different. Second, it's really too over the top, based on Arthur's past actions, he doesn't seem to be too honest when it comes to things like caring about his women, author hinted this at certain times, one of which when he gave Amanda a sword. So him having an inner monologue like this(albeit written in third person) is too much.That's probably all, I understand what kind of quality this novel has since the beginning but the author definitely got a little sideways here.