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Xsurae

Xsurae

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i love the fantasy and mystery

2023-08-19 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae5mth
    Posted

    Should be updating more and make chapters a bit more longer and more detail and info

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    I'm the biggest psycho ("Rogue Psyche")
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae5mth
    Posted

    I think the first chapter should've been a bit different and interesting need to focus more on story design

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    Futuristic Fighting Field
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae6mth
    Replied to Xsurae

    I couldn't see the Discord your server so can you please send a link below

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    Futuristic Fighting Field
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae6mth
    Replied to Zenithnovels

    Thx I will gladly join

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    Futuristic Fighting Field
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae6mth
    Replied to Tianmeng_

    haha Some of the characters only appear at the end of the book and i kinda felt stupid too

    Ch 17 The killer or?
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    Schizophrenia in me
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae6mth
    Replied to Tianmeng_

    Thx

    In the middle of the room stood my father, a figure as immovable as a statue. At his feet was my sister, her usual fiery spirit extinguished. She was pleading desperately, her words echoing around the room like a mournful lament.
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    Schizophrenia in me
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae6mth
    Commented

    the chapters escalate to quickly it's better if you add a bit more description to your work (just my opinion （＾∀＾●）ﾉｼ)

    Ch 3 growing up, e leaving the past behind
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    Shadow Of The Truth: Shu promised destiny
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae6mth
    Replied to DaoistdUj3Ph

    I don't think he meant it that way

    As I took those final steps towards him, a chill ran down my spine. The air around me seemed to thicken with anticipation. The world around me slowed down as if waiting with bated breath for what was about to unfold. And in that moment, I knew…I was stepping into the unknown.
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    Schizophrenia in me
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae6mth
    Replied to DaoistdUj3Ph

    Thx I'm literally tearing up right now you're the first person to say that.

    As I took those final steps towards him, a chill ran down my spine. The air around me seemed to thicken with anticipation. The world around me slowed down as if waiting with bated breath for what was about to unfold. And in that moment, I knew…I was stepping into the unknown.
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    Schizophrenia in me
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae7mth
    Commented

    It's not what ya think

    As I took those final steps towards him, a chill ran down my spine. The air around me seemed to thicken with anticipation. The world around me slowed down as if waiting with bated breath for what was about to unfold. And in that moment, I knew…I was stepping into the unknown.
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    Schizophrenia in me
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae7mth
    Replied to Cha_eun_Woo

    yh He killed her sis

    Ch 2 Start
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    Schizophrenia in me
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae7mth
    Replied to Cha_eun_Woo

    just keep reading

    Ch 1 Replay
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    Schizophrenia in me
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae7mth
    Commented

    why does that sound like dazai

    Eugene looked worried and sad for her: You have been sick for a long time after my mother died and we don't even know why, and a month ago you threw yourself into the sea and the doctors said it was impossible for you to wake up, you hurt your head badly, and even if it happen to wake up, you would suffer a lot. But it's good to see you okay.. I'm happy for you.
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    Shadow Of The Truth: Shu promised destiny
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae8mth
    Commented

    Yep I dont k how to think Of a good ending so bad it is[img=strong]

    Ch 6 chapter 6
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    Schizophrenia in me
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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae8mth
    Posted

    Its good my sis read this with this with she said improve writing quality since i have nothing to say[img=sad]

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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae8mth
    Commented

    Does Xiao mei get close to the MC.? I k i m asking to many questions this story is just interesting keep up the good work[img=recommend]

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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae8mth
    Replied to Odayaka

    oh k thx

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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae8mth
    Commented

    Dont k how to phrase this but later in the book are you going to write about the mc that has been reawakened

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  • Xsurae
    Xsurae8mth
    Commented

    Its very fascinating

    Ch 1 Let The Game Begin
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    Chronicles Of The Player Beyond
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