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  • DaoistfKRNOK
    DaoistfKRNOK9mth
    Replied to Hasan_Shopnil

    dude stop whining under every chapter, you're fed up with this, the original is in chinese so deal with this translation or go learn chinese

    Ch 27 Chapter 27 Extreme Method (rewrite)
    Bottom Trainer (Pokemon)
    Anime & Comics · FebyFeb
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  • DaoistfKRNOK
    DaoistfKRNOK9mth
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    thank you author for the new dose :D)) p.s. but I still think that whole tribes of Pokemon of several tens of thousands of individuals are unnecessary, and could you answer the author for what it is generally needed gg ????

    Ch 538 CH11 (533), Military (6)
    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
    Anime & Comics · Azrail93
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  • DaoistfKRNOK
    DaoistfKRNOK9mth
    Replied to DaoistfKRNOK

    p.s.s. for several months he "collected pieces of iron" and learned to shoot ... but what the fuck in general ??? and then it turns out that the officers also have Pokemon ??? why did he spend several months on a useless activity when he could spend on training his abilities p.s.s.s. the author you don’t even describe how the military takes care of their pokemon, because only in this chapter I found out that they have them, and not just weaklings of a copper level, but dark gold, which is demanding on strength, training, food, but for some reason no one I was engaged, I didn’t even think of letting my Pokemon go for a walk, and there was no question that his Pokemons didn’t get tired of sitting there in a few months in balls ??

    Ch 537 CH10 (532), Military (5)
    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
    Anime & Comics · Azrail93
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  • DaoistfKRNOK
    DaoistfKRNOK9mth
    Replied to Azrail93

    and thank you for the awesome fanfic, I can’t wait to read about travels on other continents (even if he doesn’t go to the uninhabited ones yet, but only to those on which there are already people), and the very heat will be when he goes to explore unknown continents, it’s a pity that this will have to wait too long (according to my calculations, at least 2 years, and if there are even more stats, then maybe all 5 ((((((, p.s. author, Riley, less clarification in stats after a breakout, and less micro limit breaking from pokemoshe gg, more action and action and less description of every little thing

    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
    Anime & Comics · Azrail93
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  • DaoistfKRNOK
    DaoistfKRNOK9mth
    Posted

    dude, your pokemon story is the best (I even think that your world is better than the original), but... and here are a few minuses that make it less comfortable to read (I even signed up for this): 1) you don’t need to mention in the text when the GG’s pokemon reach the micro-stat (from a to s), the GG has several dozen pokemon and you shouldn’t devote a lot of time to this, okay if he had 5-10 of them, but he really has them fucking and tart the plot on such a crowd is too stupid, 2) try not to describe new pokemon stats for half a chapter 3) micro-nuances: - this is what I still swim in your names of the days of the week, and you mention them too often and almost get lost in it all (better be 1 day, 2 day of the week, etc.) -you devote a lot of time to describing objects (we are here for the adventures of GG in this gigantic world, and not for describing how he chooses a few chapters of a couple of pebbles))) p.s. the author, let's have more plot and adventures, and not stats and descriptions of materials, because you created a huge world with a bunch of continents !!!!))) and most of the chapters you spend on describing micro-breakthroughs and breaking the limit of each of the crowd of pokemons p.s.s, author, really cool fanfic, keep writing this masterpiece, and don't take it to heart that I only wrote cons because everything else is just super, I just didn't focus on the pros of your work

    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
    Anime & Comics · Azrail93
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