Review Detail of DaoistfKRNOK in Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

dude, your pokemon story is the best (I even think that your world is better than the original), but... and here are a few minuses that make it less comfortable to read (I even signed up for this): 1) you don’t need to mention in the text when the GG’s pokemon reach the micro-stat (from a to s), the GG has several dozen pokemon and you shouldn’t devote a lot of time to this, okay if he had 5-10 of them, but he really has them fucking and tart the plot on such a crowd is too stupid, 2) try not to describe new pokemon stats for half a chapter 3) micro-nuances: - this is what I still swim in your names of the days of the week, and you mention them too often and almost get lost in it all (better be 1 day, 2 day of the week, etc.) -you devote a lot of time to describing objects (we are here for the adventures of GG in this gigantic world, and not for describing how he chooses a few chapters of a couple of pebbles))) p.s. the author, let's have more plot and adventures, and not stats and descriptions of materials, because you created a huge world with a bunch of continents !!!!))) and most of the chapters you spend on describing micro-breakthroughs and breaking the limit of each of the crowd of pokemons p.s.s, author, really cool fanfic, keep writing this masterpiece, and don't take it to heart that I only wrote cons because everything else is just super, I just didn't focus on the pros of your work