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he will become softer towards others, right? if so, please spoil it, I was interested in his cruelty and indifference to others, if this does not happen, then this story is not interesting to me, I don’t want to waste my time
I understand that everything I say is just empty complaints, but from Kumagawa the hero has only strength, not his intelligence, not charisma, not the most interesting personality, nothing. Simply put, an empty place compared to Kumagawa, good luck to you as the author
As I understand it, the protagonist is just a tool of the author, and not a character, because in this case he would not have saved the freeren. I like her, but this does not change the fact that he killed other people for the sake of survival, and saved his most dangerous enemy
so, what is next? Will all the hero's enemies be stupid dummies? because it is easy to notice how someone uses only one hand, someone will understand the weakness and swat him like a fly, in DHD everyone is monstrously fast, he will not be able to do anything. For now, good luck with your writing, but I can’t continue reading because I can’t believe that the hero will survive, or that he will become anything other than cannon fodder.