nekrom1
well, I am 18 years old, and I started my first time writing in the august of 2023 on this platform, so I ask if you like it give me support then I guess.
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nekrom15hReplied to Darksiidde- nekrom12dCommented
he got his priorities straight
"Can we do it before I die?" He blurted out without thinking. - nekrom12dCommentedDressed in a low-cut gown, every curve of her voluptuous figure was highlighted. Ezra's eyes were transfixed by the big melons in front of him. Her breasts stood together like lone soldiers at a parade. He reached out a hand and gently touched it to check if it was real.
- nekrom12dCommentedEveryday, he cursed the day he met Emily Hargrave. She had taken all his IDs and documents and borrowed millions of credits in his name. He had woken up the next day to his bed cold and Emily gone.
- nekrom12dCommentedThe dealer slid another card his way, and Ezra glanced at his hand. He was playing with his last cash, every credit he could scrape together, in a last-ditch effort to secure fast money.
- nekrom12dCommentedCh 1 It Can't Get Worse
- nekrom12dCommented
ohh so this is what he had done.
Tear continued: "So you're the reason why my promotion got delayed huh?" He looked back at the old man, "All the shit I've done for your business over the years and this is what I get? A damn junkie to take my earned pay!?" - nekrom12dCommentedHis eyes, seething with hatred, quickly darted to the youngster in the back, "And fuck you too!"
- nekrom12dReplied to nekrom1
they are dancing because they can't take out a "Tear"
Tear's eyes danced with frustration, but it seemed in the end, he made a decision. - nekrom12dCommentedTear's eyes danced with frustration, but it seemed in the end, he made a decision.
- nekrom12dCommented
Author really making his own happiness.
[Dude working here has a 3-incher... he's also 34 years old!] The graffiti read. - nekrom12dCommented
I don't know I just can't get a 'Tear' from this sad story.
"He didn't pay me for working extra hours last week and now... he cancels the promotion that I've been waiting on for 2 years!?" Tear almost couldn't believe the words coming out of his own mouth. - nekrom12dCommented
hmm, the character name is really unique
"Fuck this... there's no way." Tear Shosha said under his breath as he quickly stuffed his phone back into his old cargo pants. - nekrom14dPosted
I love the narrative style. It's not overly descriptive and sets up the emotions in scenes really well. There are no noticeable grammar errors which makes it easy to immerse yourself into reading the story. The plot is really interesting too. The only noticable problems would be that after some chapters, there are very long paragraphs in the chapter, which you know sometimes can feel bad. And some words or phrases seems repetitive or it could be for the story and it only felt to me. other then these min or things story is really great and of course the release rate is good.
- nekrom115dCommented
Sorry, to all my readers for the chaotic week of not publishing chapters, I was busy with my Maternal Grandfather's funeral and funeral rituals, and because of this, I couldn't get the time and proper mind to write, from now on updates will be consistent like before, sorry again. Hope you keep reading my work.
Ch 24 Picking a Stray (1) - nekrom123dReplied to Xx_KamiKaze_xX
Yeah he was my inspiration 😹
A grim smile tugged at the corners of Kai's lips. "Not this time, I won't give up." He raised his arms, forming a T-shape, and unleashed a torrent of thermal energy.