Thanks for the reminder, I'll keep it in mind

I will try cause someone also said that too much info dumps will not make this better

Sorry man if it's not up to tour taste cause I'm a fan of cultivation so i made this. And i will tske note of tour suggestion

Thanks you!

Your story is still in early stage so i won't say much. I just want to say you should improve character development and plot. Overall, good potential!

Good plot! I also like how you tell the story. You must govus on plot and character development cause that is the strong pints of your novel.

Good romance for me. It has nice plot and good character development. Just make sure to properly develop your character cause its this book most strong point!

Good book but definitely needs improvement. Specially world building and chatacter development. Hut nuways it's still good..................................

Well as you know, cultivation is a broken system but definitely takes time

Good one but need improvement. Specially, character development and plot. Improve grammar too cause good grammar is always the best. Keep up the good work.

Good novel for me, i honestly the story pacing in this story. And the description of this never bore me. The character devemepment is needed!

Heys guys i'm being forced to review here haha, joke aside. The plot good for me, although i'm not into romance genre, i still find it entertaining. The grammar is good and the curent development of the characters are ok. Wish your book luck!

Good for me. Plot is ok and grammar is readable. What i really like the Mc is op. You should focust character development and world building. Keep writing author, your book has the potential!

Good plot. Overall entertaining for. It just lack character details for me but it's great. So keep up the good work and good luck on being premium soon!

Just because they're dark magicians/necromancer, meaning they are evil. Bro if they were evil group, how can they have their base inside a city. People are not afraid of them too, just saying they're mysterious.

Btw, no one in the world could cure dark backlash

They agreed to give him books and was respectful to the mc is because they saw him curing dark backlash on Robin. Dark backlash is like a time bomb to any necromancer, so understand now?

He didn't used strength to know the magnetic field. He jusdged it base on his observation(He's smart mc). You will understand the rest why he can do that if you further read the story.

Thanks!

No, technically, it's still his own body from the cultivation world. But after iis transmigration into world of sword and magic he became a kid.