Vanilla_Chino
Writing is a hobby and hopefully will be a career one day. Currently an animation student and am practicing my script writing skills on here. Feel free to leave brutal feedback, I can take it.
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Vanilla_Chino6hPostedGuys when I say the author is a master of crafting a scene with descriptive language, I truely do mean it. The world and characters are also just really well paced; not too fast for you to digest. This story reminds me a bit of berserk and frieren. Just a good vibe with well balanced action as well as slice of life dialogue banter moments. Keep it up author! Amazing work.
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Bro, you can’t keep getting away with these masterpieces. How is this not your native first language? You’re so good at this!?
As Raffin accepted the gold, the firelight cast intricate shadows over the meal, creating a mesmerizing image. The flames highlighted the colors and textures of the rabbit meat, potatoes, and herbs, making them look like a painting. - Vanilla_Chino7hCommented"You claim to be a merchant?" Raffin flicked a finger at the man's uniform. "Then show your proof."
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Dude this is making me hungry
Initially, the rich scent from the stewpot captivated the man, his stomach growling loudly. Gradually, he noticed the three figures encircling him. Beads of sweat formed on his forehead, betraying his hunger or apprehension. His eyes flickered nervously between Raffin's prepared stance and the weapons trained on him, assessing his precarious situation. - Vanilla_Chino7hCommentedWith a practiced hand, Raffin set to work preparing the rabbit. He carefully seasoned it with fragrant herbs, their aromas mingling in the evening air. His knife sliced through the meat effortlessly, skillfully portioning it into manageable pieces.
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Dude you are a poet with these mesmerizing words
Smoke from the fire spiraled upward, intertwining with the night air as if ancient spirits were weaving through the darkness, tracing tales in the starlit sky. - Vanilla_Chino7hCommented
Love this banter between them. Feels dynamic and fresh, never dull
"You have an appetite for questions as insatiable as a wolf for the hunt," Raffin teased, his gaze meeting the stars with shared wanderlust. "Well, it's nothing special. I never advanced realm, so my power is night vision from the dark element." - Vanilla_Chino7hCommented
World building goes hard, like very creative
"Well, like hunters and deliverers," Raffin shrugged. "Awakening isn't as glamorous as you might think. It has its magic, sure, but the deeper you go, the less likely you are to even get married." - Vanilla_Chino7hCommented
Menacing
"Beasts, so massive they make these trees look like twigs," Raffin said, stretching his arms wide as if to embrace the road. "Dangerous places that could kill you just for breathing. Encounters so strange, you'd rather end it all for peace. That's what real hunters face." - Vanilla_Chino7hCommentedCh 7 Blessings from Father Joe
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Saint rose… I need lore on the god system
"Raffin," Joe said, smiling. "I'm counting on you, son. May the blessings of Saint Rose guide your journey." - Vanilla_Chino7hCommented
You really do have a way with words
He gingerly placed his broken lute into the bag. Warm light from the window highlighted the instrument's details as he tried to recall memories of his past, but they remained elusive. With a sigh, he finished packing and glanced at his friend. - Vanilla_Chino7hCommented
What a humbling chore fr
"Coffee break was an hour ago, boys," he grumbled, crossing his arms. "You know the deal. You can have breakfast, but you'll be washing dishes after." - Vanilla_Chino7hCommented"In the end, it seems we're both cursed," Asdras said, glancing at the dead wolves.
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Soloing a wolf pack is insane
The fight escalated into a deadly ballet as Brian's spear found its mark repeatedly until the wolves' cries were swallowed by silence. - Vanilla_Chino7hCommented
Broooo this disruption so good
The world narrowed to the sound of his heartbeat as Brian faced the snarling pack. - Vanilla_Chino7hCommentedSuddenly, he froze, his eyes widening at the sight of six wolves ahead, their mottled fur blending with the trees.
- Vanilla_Chino7hCommentedRaffin raised an eyebrow, but Joe's expression remained unchanged, as if he had anticipated it.