Vanilla_Chino
Writing is a hobby and hopefully will be a career one day. Currently an animation student and am practicing my script writing skills on here. Feel free to leave brutal feedback, I can take it.
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Vanilla_Chino2dCommentedSo far great, keep it up author!
Before she could reply, she saw herself surrounded by an empty space and her eyes narrowed as she wondered what was happening to her and a magical creature appeared in front of her, looking directly at her with piercing red eyes.- Vanilla_Chino4dPosted
Guys when I say the author is a master of crafting a scene with descriptive language, I truely do mean it. The world and characters are also just really well paced; not too fast for you to digest. This story reminds me a bit of berserk and frieren. Just a good vibe with well balanced action as well as slice of life dialogue banter moments. Keep it up author! Amazing work.
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Bro, you can’t keep getting away with these masterpieces. How is this not your native first language? You’re so good at this!?
As Raffin accepted the gold, the firelight cast intricate shadows over the meal, creating a mesmerizing image. The flames highlighted the colors and textures of the rabbit meat, potatoes, and herbs, making them look like a painting. - Vanilla_Chino4dCommented"You claim to be a merchant?" Raffin flicked a finger at the man's uniform. "Then show your proof."
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Dude this is making me hungry
Initially, the rich scent from the stewpot captivated the man, his stomach growling loudly. Gradually, he noticed the three figures encircling him. Beads of sweat formed on his forehead, betraying his hunger or apprehension. His eyes flickered nervously between Raffin's prepared stance and the weapons trained on him, assessing his precarious situation. - Vanilla_Chino4dCommentedWith a practiced hand, Raffin set to work preparing the rabbit. He carefully seasoned it with fragrant herbs, their aromas mingling in the evening air. His knife sliced through the meat effortlessly, skillfully portioning it into manageable pieces.
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Dude you are a poet with these mesmerizing words
Smoke from the fire spiraled upward, intertwining with the night air as if ancient spirits were weaving through the darkness, tracing tales in the starlit sky. - Vanilla_Chino4dCommented
Love this banter between them. Feels dynamic and fresh, never dull
"You have an appetite for questions as insatiable as a wolf for the hunt," Raffin teased, his gaze meeting the stars with shared wanderlust. "Well, it's nothing special. I never advanced realm, so my power is night vision from the dark element." - Vanilla_Chino4dCommented
World building goes hard, like very creative
"Well, like hunters and deliverers," Raffin shrugged. "Awakening isn't as glamorous as you might think. It has its magic, sure, but the deeper you go, the less likely you are to even get married." - Vanilla_Chino4dCommented
Menacing
"Beasts, so massive they make these trees look like twigs," Raffin said, stretching his arms wide as if to embrace the road. "Dangerous places that could kill you just for breathing. Encounters so strange, you'd rather end it all for peace. That's what real hunters face." - Vanilla_Chino4dCommentedCh 7 Blessings from Father Joe
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Saint rose… I need lore on the god system
"Raffin," Joe said, smiling. "I'm counting on you, son. May the blessings of Saint Rose guide your journey." - Vanilla_Chino4dCommented
You really do have a way with words
He gingerly placed his broken lute into the bag. Warm light from the window highlighted the instrument's details as he tried to recall memories of his past, but they remained elusive. With a sigh, he finished packing and glanced at his friend. - Vanilla_Chino4dCommented
What a humbling chore fr
"Coffee break was an hour ago, boys," he grumbled, crossing his arms. "You know the deal. You can have breakfast, but you'll be washing dishes after."