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Kevin_Phillips78

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  • Kevin_Phillips78
    Kevin_Phillips781yr
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    I highly recommend this fanfic, as it has been an incredibly enjoyable read for me. The conversation is well-written and avoids the problems of cringe-worthy writing thanks to excellent grammar. The updates have been steady, and I want they will keep arriving without pause. The story strikes a perfect pacing balance, neither rushed nor slow, and the action sequences are better than 80% of other fanfics. The main character is a breath of fresh air, deviating from the typical archetypes that plague dragon ball fanfics. While the world-building is still developing, it's clear that the author has plans to expand the Dragon Ball universe with new themes. In summary, this fanfic is a must-read, offering excellent grammar, comprehensible dialogue, consistent updates, exciting action, and a relatable protagonist.

    Dragon ball : Echoes of the Void
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  • Kevin_Phillips78
    Kevin_Phillips781yr
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    This was a good supporting chapter; perhaps, the future mission will be equally interesting to read.

    Ch 6 Mission Centre ?
    Dragon ball : Echoes of the Void
    Anime & Comics · Ashlin_17
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  • Kevin_Phillips78
    Kevin_Phillips781yr
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    How did you write those weird letters ?

    "Saiyan, Renji, power level,?̸͉̥̦͖͔̑̒̿?̸̖͇̭͙͌ͬ͊̌?̡̦̬̮̽ .Stored within the database," the machine declares solemnly.
    Dragon ball : Echoes of the Void
    Anime & Comics · Ashlin_17
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