What’s the point of these chapters? It’s all one big recap

Hey author, so far the rewrite is looking good. In the future, if you wanna continue using chatgpt or other ai to help your writing, would you consider removing some of the unnecessary wording and extra sentence complexity that chatgpt tends to throw in every sentence? What I mean is that chatgpt isn't optimized to write paragraphs at a time, so it tries to make every single sentence sound profound and "educated", but this makes the writing style really lame and predictable, taking away the uniqueness of your writing style. Maybe you could keep your story a mix of your original sentences and chatgpt-generated sentences, like 1 chatgpt for every 3-4 original? This way your story can flow better and seem more natural, keeping it more authentic. Just a thought.

Stop this chatgpt nonsense please. It totally ruins the flow of your story. I like what you've written so far, no need to muddy the waters trying to save time and sound intellectual.

Stop it. Get some help

God. I can’t take it anymore. Too juvenile

If he doesn’t kill these retards then he’s a massive chump

Nobody cares about this extra backstory

Finally. Pls don’t drop when it’s getting good author

Oof rip to mc’s likeability

Crossovers ruin the story. It makes any plots stall since your writing focus pull in too many directions. Please tell me starfire is gonna be the only asspull, or else it’s time to skip

Bro marvel has enough characters and bad guys as is. There’s no need to corrupt it by pulling dc/other characters outta the woodwork. It’s lame as hell

Curtly*

Bro this stuff is just unnecessary complications, but you do you. So far it's been like one huuuge prologue and set up for the overarching conflict, even though it's been like 60 chapters. I'm scared we'll never get to Alacrya because the author is gonna drop before then. This is usually the problem with tbate fics, they just drop around the end of the xyrus arc.

Lol author deployed strategic nerf attack against mc to add unnecessary drama

His aether abilities are kinda weak for personal power. Hopefully they get more powerful and he gets more, else he’ll play second fiddle to arthur. Also his legacy abilities are kinda nerfed, let’s see if they improve as he grows older I really hope author doesn’t try to forcibly “balance” mc when he made mc sound like a bundle of potential at the beginning of the story. Too man fics nerf the protagonist for artificial tension

This is boring because mc doesn’t really do anything special besides get stronger

What happened to trying to fight arthur to test swordsmanship?

Bro if you literally rewrote this story and ask for a patreon, then you could AT LEAST run it through spellcheck and grammarly. Just copy paste you chapter to google docs for spell check and grammarly for grammar, it’s not that hard!

Lol the mispelling is understandable because some people (such as indians) pronounce "lavatory" as 'levoratory'. I never understood where the extra syllable came from but I'd gotten used to it on my trips to india

this fkin kid wants answers on demand all the time.