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I was a bit disappointed with these two three chapters, since Mc had high hormones and spread seeds everywhere, the story started to get weird (even when War was much better than this). I don't understand if the author did it on purpose or ran out of ideas, but I think this idea is a bit bad. Maybe because Mc is strong too quickly, the story can't keep up, especially since he has retired, don't you think?
Isn't he only 13? I understand he is originally an adult, but it feels strange to have such an indiscriminate relationship. Even though I already like the story that seems free, without elements of romance and hormones. Please don't say if he will open the harem later, it's best not to spoil the story
I read 40 chapters in one night, and this is really a good story. I liked Mc's character and enjoyed the plot. Her relationship with Sasuke is also very natural, and they are very suitable! I hope it ends well (Happy ending) And Message to the author, please give space to the writing (paragraph spacing) so as not to confuse, and reduce copy paste (because there are some that are copied repeatedly). Thank you
Good story, interesting story idea. The only drawback in my opinion is that Mc is too charm-grazing with girls and most likely has. Harem? To be honest I'm a bit tired of reading Ff HP whose prontagonist has a harem. If the writer made another HP story, could it make Mc oc female and not harem? Don't make him a supporting role either but really prontagonist (Draco or harry is fine, but I'm more cloudy Draco as a couple. Maybe Draco could have changed for the better if he had been friends with mc earlier)