Good story, interesting story idea. The only drawback in my opinion is that Mc is too charm-grazing with girls and most likely has. Harem? To be honest I'm a bit tired of reading Ff HP whose prontagonist has a harem. If the writer made another HP story, could it make Mc oc female and not harem? Don't make him a supporting role either but really prontagonist (Draco or harry is fine, but I'm more cloudy Draco as a couple. Maybe Draco could have changed for the better if he had been friends with mc earlier)
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