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Finger_of_Shiva

Finger_of_Shiva

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  • Finger_of_Shiva
    Finger_of_Shiva9mth
    Commented

    💀💀💀. ⚰️

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: Goodbyes
    Cultivator's Slice of Life: Spiritual Farming System
    Fantasy · BigToad
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  • Finger_of_Shiva
    Finger_of_Shiva10mth
    Replied to Mart_Ero

    I am glad!Yes, from a perspective as a reader, I understand your feelings haha.But I can say, according to current schemes, the protagonist-centered chapters outnumber the opposing ones by a wide margin.

    Ch 26 [A cup of tea]
    Goaizu
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  • Finger_of_Shiva
    Finger_of_Shiva10mth
    Replied to Mart_Ero

    Hello!Yes, the proportion of perspectives between the secondary characters and the protagonist is similar. Although the protagonist maintains a significant difference.During this period, especially, it was so to change the focus of the chapters and structure future events.But I appreciate your sincere and kind review. I hope you didn't dislike my story too much.

    Ch 26 [A cup of tea]
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  • Finger_of_Shiva
    Finger_of_Shiva10mth
    Replied to Cdn_Memu

    Answering your question, yes, he is evil. His moral is black.To remove any fog of confusion: The play maintains both labels, because Federick, yes, can be categorized as a villain, but at select moments. He is not a crude character who regards life as pasture, he doesn't ignore the consequences of his actions; rather, he moves at his convenience. Therefore, his attitude most of the time will not be reflected as a villainous characterization, but based on selfishness and self-interest... Antihero?

    Goaizu
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  • Finger_of_Shiva
    Finger_of_Shiva10mth
    Replied to Homelander69

    Hello!It is a conventional transmigration of the xianxia genre. It will have similar elements to the "Villain of Destiny" novels, but the difference would lie in its Modus operandi: Relying more on his wit and not a surname. (His targets will not be the "children of destiny").The novel is currently at an early stage, where the events unfold in an introductory role; therefore, it may give the image you mention.By the same token, the personality does not shine as promised. Its current morality is conventional because it will be structured based on the development of the protagonist's personality and identity in future chapters.

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  • Finger_of_Shiva
    Finger_of_Shiva11mth
    Replied to Homelander69

    Thank you very much for the correction, my friend! I have been editing. Sorry for the quality

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  • Finger_of_Shiva
    Finger_of_Shiva11mth
    Replied to Homelander69

    It wasn't a usual day for me

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  • Finger_of_Shiva
    Finger_of_Shiva11mth
    Commented

    I can be my own fan lol

    Ch 6 [Mystery sequence]
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  • Finger_of_Shiva
    Finger_of_Shiva11mth
    Commented

    I did not like the interaction in this chapter. He gave her high-quality designs, which even surprised the old veteran lady; therefore, he should not feel ashamed to ask for "money". A serious lack in the personality of the protagonist, with no common sense in value. Please, author, keep these points in mind when writing. Thanks, I like the novel very much at the moment.

    Ch 16 Making Strategy for Eternal Spring Tower
    I Have Infinite Systems In The Immortal World
    Eastern · starry8sword
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  • Finger_of_Shiva
    Finger_of_Shiva11mth
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    Well, here is the writer supporting his content (I have good self-esteem). As a note: All the content is great, it's just that, honestly, the translation leaves something to be desired. Thanks

    Goaizu
    Fantasy · Finger_of_Shiva
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