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The story is still ok but seems to run around in circles with nothing beneficial to the lead female. She came back with no plan forward except to deal with matters of the family instead of dealing with enemies. It stretches a little but the story is good. Aside from her grudges I would have liked to see her making a lot more positive changes.
How is it Tristan's car? Is she working for Adrian or Tristan?