Serious ?! Wow, I'm very glad now 😁

Yes. Because besides Naruto having someone to trust with all things about his system, if there is a team function, Naruto will be able to share his item and status gains to them, which would be really cool to see happening 👍 (Google Translation)

I have some ideas for magical items that can be used in the story and that could be useful for Naruto: Teleport Item: Allows the bearer to teleport to any place they have been to before (I know there's Hiraishin, but a teleportation item, that doesn't use Chakra, right from the beginning is EXTREMELY useful, both in combat and in locomotion) Invisibility Item: While being worn, the wearer cannot be seen or felt by anyone (Very useful for ANBU, powder cannot be seen and will not be felt by sensors. Furthermore, it is very useful for pranks 😂👍) Environment Manipulation Item: Allows the wearer to manipulate the element present in the environment (The name and description are not very accurate, but let me explain: It's basically the Avatar Bending, if Naruto is in a place with water he can use the item to manipulate it at will, he can also use it to manipulate the earth from the ground, the air to levitate and so on. So I believe it is an extremely versatile item and very useful for ANBU and other things) Object Change Item: Allows the bearer to change the shape of inanimate objects to whatever they desire (Basically Harry Potter's Transfiguration, but it can be very useful for combat and complex things as well as for simpler and more banal things) Chakra Attunement Item: Allows the bearer to tune in to their highest affinity Elemental Chakra, allowing absolute control over it (This item will allow Naruto to have absurd control over his Wind Chakra, being able to strengthen wind jutsus, shape the wind chakra as he wishes and even transform his body into wind, being able to create an intangibility equal to Logia de One Piece. An idea that I found very interesting, especially now that Hinata gave Naruto a wind jutsu scroll) And that is all ! I think these items will be good to be included in the story and I believe that other weapons will not be very interesting as Naruto already has his Sen No Tenrui. Furthermore, all of the above are open to change, whether in name or usage, do what you think is best for the story 👍 (Google Translation)

He didn't abandon it. He is constantly updating the story on Patreon, and is currently on chapter 51. So just wait for the author to decide to update again on Webnovel

I understand your point, but I believe you are being a little hasty here. It turns out that the characters themselves (and the author) recognize that it was really rushed, because as explained in the chapter, they saw that anything could happen while they were being heroes, so they wanted to enjoy it while they could (and we know that things will get really crazy from then on). And as for the bedroom scene, it was the heat of the moment, there's not much to say. And as for Momo's personality, I feel that she was very well characterized, and she didn't have much development with Izuku precisely because she is shy and polite like in the anime, and the author compensates for this lack of development in the beginning with more scenes them now. Anyway, the comment was huge, but I just wanted to say that because I feel like the author is doing a great job with Momo and Izuku 👍 (Google Translation)

He was referring to how many people there will be in the harem. So if there is a harem in the story, there should be 2 to 4 women in it. And particularly, I don't want a harem in the story, but if there is, let it be done well 👍

I know it might be a little late, but I would find it interesting if you detailed each of the fights, so you could very well develop the other characters, as they are a little sidelined throughout the story. Now, if you intend to make the fights the same as the anime, then you can summarize them, so you can focus on the main fights with the biggest differences in relation to the anime (Google Translation)

I don't particularly like Katsuki, but I really liked what you did here. While most stories want Izuku to humiliate or take revenge on Bakugou, you still have Izuku win, but by showing humility and recognition to Katsuki, and making him seek to improve not only himself, but his relationship with Izuku and still asking him for help, something unprecedented and which surprised me a lot. In short, I loved your characterization of Katsuki and the development you gave him 👍 (Google Translation)

I'm really enjoying this story. The writing is great, the updates are good and the character development here is very good, I really liked how you make Naruto constantly evolve both physically and mentally in a very gradual way considering all his Buffs and his knowledge of the future. Overall, it's a very enjoyable story to read and I'm very curious to see the future of this story. (Google Translator)

Glad you're back. I admit I was already worried, but I'm glad to know you're okay, man. Thank you very much for the chapter and see you later (Google Translation)

Bro, just because the story isn't to your liking, that's no reason to give an ABSURDLY low rating and harm the author's work

Excellent chapter, I'm really enjoying the story so far

Look, I wouldn't say that he is a Villain, but rather that he is in fact an Anti-Hero, just more on the Villain side. Let me explain, there are Anti-Heroes who may be a little "nicer" than others, just as there are some more "evil" than others, but none of them reach the extreme of things (the Hero or Villain side). And that's the case with Ren, he does everything that can benefit him and his crew, but that doesn't make him a "bad guy", at most it just makes his actions "questionable". In other words, he really is an Anti-Hero!!! (Google Translation)

NEW REVIEW: I just finished the most recent chapters (79 to be exact), and I took the opportunity to read some of the first ones too. So with that, I can start by saying that the story ended up taking quite unexpected turns, chapter 70 was really a shock for me, in that I must recognize the author's courage. So overall, the story is still great and its pacing is very good. However, the story has its problems, but the main problem that you can see that the author is having difficulty with here is precisely: the development of the characters. As Ren is the MC, he doesn't suffer much from this problem, but in the case of women, it has already bothered me a little, as more and more women are joining the crew, so it becomes more and more difficult. to develop them all. Kaya is a great example of this, despite her being the MC's 3rd official girlfriend, she ends up not being able to have much development because either the author ends up focusing too much on the main ones (Nami, Nojiko, and now Robin), or he needs to give more space to others characters, like Mikita, Tashigi and now Zala and Khalifa, which also ends up causing the same problem for other non-main characters. So it would be great if the Author took some time off from the main story to better develop Ren's crew, including his new fleet. And I also think it's very important that the Author doesn't forget certain abilities that he gives to his characters (for example Nojiko, who got Death Wink in Chapter 38 and hasn't used it yet), because if he's going to give new abilities to in the end they are left aside, so it is better not to add them in the first place. Finally, moving on to the technical part, the writing is quite decent and the update frequency is very good, you can see that the author is very committed to his story, and that is really cool to see. And I also want to make it very clear that despite all this criticism now, I am really enjoying reading it and I only wish the best for this story. Anyway, that's all I had to say. For now, I'm very curious to see where this story will go. Until later (Google Translation)

Finally they found each other!!! There wasn't much dialogue, but it was cool And as for the "fight" with Kuro, it was quite... annoying 😐, but there wasn't much to do, Mc is FAR above the East Blue pirates. At least it will give ladies space to shine, that's what I want to see 🤩 Thank you very much for the chapter and see you later 👋 (Google Translation)

Yes, I saw that it's Oda's art, but it's the first time I've seen it

I didn't know about this art, but now we can get a glimpse of Nami Swordsman in the future

Nami Swordsman is real!!! Oh My God 🤩🤩🤩 And they finally arrive at Syrup Village. I'm sure Ren will fight Kuro and his crew, so I can't wait to see the ladies defeat them along with Luffy and Zoro (and maybe even Maron). Thanks for today's chapter, I hope I can post another chapter today, but if not then that's ok See you later 👋 (Google Translation)

And the ladies are getting stronger and stronger. I'm so proud. And I can't wait to see them soloing their enemies And finally the MCs will meet!!! Could an alliance emerge between them??? I'm very curious to see this, especially your OC Thank you very much for today's chapters, you did a great job bro 👍 See you later 👋 (Google Translation)

Author, do you already know what to name Ren's crew?? So far I haven't seen her mentioned... TFTC, and I'll wait for the next chapter today ( Google Translator )