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Dem_113mthCommentedCh 13 Echoes of Destiny - The Super Saiyan Prophecy- Dem_114mthCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
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- Dem_114mthCommentedCh 12 The Alien Wilderness
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- Dem_114mthCommentedCh 135 Tailed Beasts, Perspective and Assistance
- Dem_114mthCommentedCh 79 Duel, Friendship, Technique and Time
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- Dem_115mthCommentedCh 11 Arrival on Alderaan - A Stirring in the Frieza Force
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She does have a more subdued image.
Her companion, a being named Lilith, shot her a warning glance. "Quiet," she whispered, her voice barely audible over the hum of the docking bay. "Don't stir trouble. They're a prideful lot, easily provoked over the smallest things." Her words, laced with a mix of agitation and caution, echoed the reputation the Saiyans had earned among the Frieza Force. - Dem_115mthReplied to Ashlin_17
I think this option is better. Where's the fun If you know everything already.
Alternatively, would you find it more engaging if he gradually gains information about the Dragon Ball universe? Imagine him receiving visions of future events, slowly piecing together the narrative bit by bit. This could add an element of suspense and unpredictability to the story. I'd love to hear your thoughts on this. - Dem_115mthCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
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- Dem_115mthCommentedCh 8 Anticipation and Arrival
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What about Aspera (Asparagus) for the lady and Lotan (Lotus) for the boy.
So, I'm reaching out to you to help me brainstorm some unique and snappy names for these characters. - Dem_1111mthCommentedCh 7 First mission
- Dem_1111mthCommented"Hell, that strange-looking tentacle lady gives me the creeps."
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That's what she said.
"It's bigger than I expected."