Thanks for the chapter and keep going with the good work bro.

Thanks for the chapter. keep going with the good work bro.🤝🏿

One piece

If I'm not wrong she and Ace were friends. And Ace died bc of Blackbeard so she had a reason to go after him to seek revenge..(English is not my first language so don't mind if there are some mistakes ahahaha)

Thanks for the chapter and keep going with the good work bro 😎

Thanks for the chapter and keep going with the good work bro 😎

Thanks for the chapter and keep going with the good work bro.

Thanks for the chapter and keep going with the good work bro 😎

Bro definitely this one… and he can use the scythe to attack and the other thing that I forgot the name 😂 for defense plus he can store souls inside, like healing, power booster, and many other things ahahah.

Bro can you tell me where I can read the original?

Good story bro, wish you the best luck with it. but it's not my thing, I really liked the powers that you gave to your OC but making him with a blank personality and following Luffy made me loose my enthusiasm to read the story.

Thanks for the chapter. definitely caught my attention so I'll be waiting for the following chapters.

Give the horse some demon wings hahaha

For his second df, give him something to help him power up his dragon fruit instead of some logia fruit. like he could get burundi world (don't really know how to write his name ahahah) if I'm not wrong is fruit allows him to multiple everything 10x (that's OP without a single doubt) he will eventually be kaido with steroids 🤣. but for that you have to make some plot cause I'm not sure when they put him on level 6 (Impel down)

Yeah I had the exact same though after I read it in another ff, you can definitely make MC eat the dragon artificial fruit (just change the color to something else instead of pink please ahahah). for it to make sense you make so that when vegapunk left punk hazard he put the devil fruit in some hidden room that creaser couldn't get in to get the fruit. hmm you can give enel df to mc crewmate.

Ahahah keep the good work bro. don't make your MC some beta type MC or for him to follow the straw hats tail (make him start his own crew and with the timeline his in is pretty easy to get some powerful or people with great potential joining in)

And about the df for your mc I have some ideas for it but you decide first if you have something in mind ahahah

Ahahah no need to thank me bro, it was my pleasure to help you with that. I liked the idea that you had for your ff so it wasn't a big deal to give you an helping hand 🤝🏾 I'll be waiting for the next chapters, take your time and think very well the story and if you need help just say.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter bro. definitely caught my attention so I'll be waiting for the next chapters🤝🏾