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Dapperestpenguin

Dapperestpenguin

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2023-06-12 JoinedGlobal
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  • Dapperestpenguin
    Dapperestpenguin5mth
    Replied to yami_die_bestie

    I'm planning on restarting after the New Year. Both my work and personal life have been extra busy since early November so after it cools back down I'll start posting again. Thanks for the interest!

    Ch 15 Clothes Do Not Make the Man
    Not So Delicate Flower
    Fantasy · Dapperestpenguin
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  • Dapperestpenguin
    Dapperestpenguin8mth
    Replied to Jejeyy

    I appreciate your interest in my story! If enough people become interested in interacting on discord I'd certainly consider making one, however, until that point I'd prefer to stick with answering questions or interacting with people interested in my story within the comments of the app.

    In the Kingdom of MidAria live several different races. Most prominent and dominant are humans. Adaptable, intelligent, and incredibly varying. They make up the royalty and most powerful noble houses. Their combat abilities are difficult to generalize as no two humans fight exactly the same way. The next highest in populace would be the Kyats.
    Not So Delicate Flower
    Fantasy · Dapperestpenguin
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  • Dapperestpenguin
    Dapperestpenguin8mth
    Posted

    Shameless author review time!This is my first attempt at writing a coherent story and I'm not even fully sure about all the details are along the way to the major plot points I have planned. I know I don't want the story to drag too much in the first Arc as iIset the stage for the world and for Arc 2 where the stakes are going to be raised.Hope that anyone who decides to pick up the story enjoys it!

    Not So Delicate Flower
    Fantasy · Dapperestpenguin
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  • Dapperestpenguin
    Dapperestpenguin9mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 9 Breakfast?
    Abyssal Awakening
    Fantasy · Reili
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  • Dapperestpenguin
    Dapperestpenguin10mth
    Commented

    Strong start to your new work. Luckily I started Nanomancer late so I've got like ~900 chapters to read while I wait for new ones of this!

    Ch 2 Diving Into The Abyss
    Abyssal Awakening
    Fantasy · Reili
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  • Dapperestpenguin
    Dapperestpenguin10mth
    Commented

    This novel is interesting and I can tell a lot of thought goes into the world building and character building aspects of the story, but why is the title what it is? I'm roughly a third of the way through the released chapters and Yumo hasnt't even met the male lead much less killed him. Which that wouldn't be a problem for me if this was called something like 'Reincarnated as the First Demon Lord' or something like that. Seems odd to have to wait more than a hundred chapters for the namesake of the story to actually make sense and pay off.

    Ch 120 Chapter 121: The Elves
    Abyssal Chronicles
    Fantasy · Hail_The_loli
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  • Dapperestpenguin
    Dapperestpenguin10mth
    Commented

    Nodding is a form of confirmation though...

    Li Yu nodded slightly, neither confirming nor denying: "Yes..."
    Abyssal Chronicles
    Fantasy · Hail_The_loli
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  • Dapperestpenguin
    Dapperestpenguin11mth
    Replied to Hail_The_loli

    If her death is in reference to the Demon Temple's destruction that still would mean her current self's death as she is the literal embodiment of the temple. So for as far as I've gotten in the story iIdon't think I've been introduced to a plot device that would allow for her continued survival. All I'm saying is it's strange from my perspective to continue down the path of destruction without looking for alternatives when she was told as a spirit she didn't have to be destroyed.All in all enjoying the story enough to keep reading so keep up the good work.

    Ch 77 chapter 78:
    Abyssal Chronicles
    Fantasy · Hail_The_loli
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  • Dapperestpenguin
    Dapperestpenguin11mth
    Commented

    It feels really strange that Yumo remembers what she was told as a spirit so incorrectly. She was never promised that she could go back. That was just a possibility. And if she's having trouble with sending her children to be bosses then why doesn't she remember the part where she was told that she didnt'thave to die to the 'protagonists'?

    Ch 77 chapter 78:
    Abyssal Chronicles
    Fantasy · Hail_The_loli
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