Dapperestpenguin
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I appreciate your interest in my story! If enough people become interested in interacting on discord I'd certainly consider making one, however, until that point I'd prefer to stick with answering questions or interacting with people interested in my story within the comments of the app.
Shameless author review time!This is my first attempt at writing a coherent story and I'm not even fully sure about all the details are along the way to the major plot points I have planned. I know I don't want the story to drag too much in the first Arc as iIset the stage for the world and for Arc 2 where the stakes are going to be raised.Hope that anyone who decides to pick up the story enjoys it!
This novel is interesting and I can tell a lot of thought goes into the world building and character building aspects of the story, but why is the title what it is? I'm roughly a third of the way through the released chapters and Yumo hasnt't even met the male lead much less killed him. Which that wouldn't be a problem for me if this was called something like 'Reincarnated as the First Demon Lord' or something like that. Seems odd to have to wait more than a hundred chapters for the namesake of the story to actually make sense and pay off.
Nodding is a form of confirmation though...
If her death is in reference to the Demon Temple's destruction that still would mean her current self's death as she is the literal embodiment of the temple. So for as far as I've gotten in the story iIdon't think I've been introduced to a plot device that would allow for her continued survival. All I'm saying is it's strange from my perspective to continue down the path of destruction without looking for alternatives when she was told as a spirit she didn't have to be destroyed.All in all enjoying the story enough to keep reading so keep up the good work.
It feels really strange that Yumo remembers what she was told as a spirit so incorrectly. She was never promised that she could go back. That was just a possibility. And if she's having trouble with sending her children to be bosses then why doesn't she remember the part where she was told that she didnt'thave to die to the 'protagonists'?