Review Detail of Dapperestpenguin in Not So Delicate Flower

Shameless author review time!This is my first attempt at writing a coherent story and I'm not even fully sure about all the details are along the way to the major plot points I have planned. I know I don't want the story to drag too much in the first Arc as iIset the stage for the world and for Arc 2 where the stakes are going to be raised.Hope that anyone who decides to pick up the story enjoys it!