Great start. Its good and fun to see a author point out the common troupes in reincarnation series. Premise is good cant help but read other good upcoming series from a fellow writer. Keep it up👍

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An easy story to follow. Easy to figure out on who is talking. Interesting premise and world building.

I like the storytelling. Not overly complicated and easy to follow. The characters development throughout. The descripive words and world building. An interesting premise. I enjoy these types of stories. I will continue to read.

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Hey, guys author here this is the 2nd story that am writing. Again just writing for fun and just writing down ideas and thoughts. Chapter releases am not too sure how often ill write this but expect at least 2 if not 1 chapters each week. I also got "The Virtues of this Tropical Isle" that am still working on. This story is completely different from the TVTI as it follows Valerus Marina a man who has been reincarnated from another world. I put more emotion and connection to you the reader in one so we'll see how both series go and enjoy. So please go ahead and support both stories. If you have any comments or suggestions let me know.

Hey guys the author here. I'm letting you know that this is my first time writing a story, so bear with me [img=recommend] This story will mostly follow Everett C Sage as he and his fellow Virtues attempt to stop the world from ending. It will have comedy, action, and adventure elements to the story. Filled with a cast of multiple characters please refer back to the characters list in Chapter 0 if you ever get lost on whos who. Please let me know how I am doing; all your feedback will be gladly appreciated. The Virtues of This Tropical Isle won't be my last as I am planning to write another series in the future. Right now am just having fun writing. Please let me know if there are any questions. Please enjoy my work as I intend to post at least two chapters weekly it may change if this series begins to pick up.