nice rasengan on the cover btw

Great writing quality. Bad update stability when author published all his stash, well... not as bad as mine definitely. Story? you're in for a big surprise in the near chapter... beware! Character design? tbh i don't really like the mc but objectively speaking its a good design. World background? uh... Anyway keep it up, let webnovel knows "planG"ism!

fixed it. does it show italic in yours?

Yup he did, manhwa never shows it but novel did

whoops mb, inkstone have an italic words but somehow it doesnt show up here, thanks

yeah mb bro, thanks for the reminder lol

me too but her bangs...

supp, good to see you again

Adult

I love martial worlds and i know dd is like the fantasy backwater... but i think calling it equal to limit douluo is stretching it no? I might lack information tho so I would be thankful if you can tell me whats the feat of marrow tempering realm cultivator did...

Adult

Its mentioned that if the grandmaster didnt show up, the gatekeeper could have a sleeve arrow to his throat. Coupled with his previous sect who majored in hidden weapon, i assume he is quick to kill his enemy and tend to not thinking far ahead.

but well yeah i got your point, i should have written him to be more calm and not have outburst too easily.___ He get physical when it concerns the one he care about i think? like the Nuoding's gatekeeper incident, he tried killing them for blocking and shoving Old Jack. Also he threw his weight around when he is a godking in dd2, a lot.

1. gentle and kind? He split her daughter's soul and in a sense, torture her and his son in law. ______ 2. wise? for a wise person he sure doesnt think far ahead lol.________ Destroying killing city, spirit hall, and letting Xiao Wu participate in the tournament when there are a lot of titled douluo.______ He also doesnt force Xiao Wu to eat the fairy herbs, sure it feels romantic but its stupid, if she ate it then no one will discover her identity.

im using her donghua's appearance

I dont know if you guys gonna like it, but I dont want my mc to bother about tang san cheat and prowess too much. His own cheat is already far too strong tbh.

1. I did this cuz we wont see them for a long time after this arc_____ 2. I thought I put the harem tag on this novel tho? so ofc its going down the path of harem.