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Yalatola

Yalatola

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To write a great story we need to live them

2023-06-02 JoinedNigeria
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  • Yalatola
    Yalatola4h
    Replied to aster_infinitum

    since a long time, he had a life before the beginning of the story.

    "So... 1 minute equals 5 here, so 5 equals... 25? Let's go to 30 just to be sure."
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    Yalatola4h
    Replied to aster_infinitum

    thanks

    "... Dora, as I told you, things are going on in the background, and for reasons that even I don't understand, I can't say anything. But I heard what you said earlier about your family, you really want them to be safe, don't you? So you'll have to think of something better than your E-rank powers to protect them."
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    Yalatola4h
    Replied to aster_infinitum

    No she's honest, and MC is male

    As they exchanged smiles, he bid farewell and walked away. Unbeknownst to him, as he turned his back, he remained oblivious to the subtle shift in her expression. Only she held the understanding of the true significance behind his departure.
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    Yalatola4h
    Replied to aster_infinitum

    MC is male

    "What's wrong with you? Why are you like this? You're nothing like what you were before, When we started dating you were more cool, more capable, how did you become like this?!" She said in anger.
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    Yalatola6h
    Replied to TheAncientOnell

    it's more complicated, first, keep in mind the levels E to S, a strong E rank avatar would be weaker than a veteran S rank of other categories, plus they are all birth at E rank so usually an S rank with no special talent would have to train for decades and not everyone can reach this level. Second, in this world, many things are kept secret and will be revealed soon (around chap 40-80) the concept of avatars has been modified to hide the true avatars So basically to normal eyes, an avatar looks special, to the hidden world, he would be nothing

    "Yes, an E-rank Avatar with magic and healing abilities, not to mention he was trained in an affiliate of the academy, basically this boy is a true genius."
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    Yalatola7h
    Replied to TheAncientOnell

    it's like being a black bear in a world of dogs, while there are polar bears and brown bears around

    "Yes, an E-rank Avatar with magic and healing abilities, not to mention he was trained in an affiliate of the academy, basically this boy is a true genius."
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    Yalatola7h
    Replied to TheAncientOnell

    won't last very long. Small warning anyway, I've met enough readers to say that this novel won't be what you expect with a 99% chance, and I don't say that to tease. Nothing is what it seems and every character has at least two sides, assume by default that all your assumptions will be wrong. I'm here if you need any info.

    "... So you're not denying the ugly lady part?"
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  • Yalatola
    Yalatola8h
    Replied to TheAncientOnell

    early chapters the plot hasn't begun yet

    Ch 4 The Heroine and the Genius
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    Yalatola9h
    Replied to TheAncientOnell

    Greek, it has a meaning for a future event in the story

    Anesidora was a valued emissary within the village, belonging to the esteemed emissary team.
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    Yalatola2d
    Replied to Yalatola

    Envy Awakening

    Hope:
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    Yalatola2d
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    Lust Awakening

    Liliana:
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  • Yalatola
    Yalatola2d
    Replied to Arizona_Montana

    corrected, thanks

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  • Yalatola
    Yalatola7d
    Replied to Jiyan_Purohit

    Glad it pleases you, I wasn't sure anymore about the quality of my writing. Thank you

    "... I'll tell Mr. Albert that you keep calling him my mother."
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  • Yalatola
    Yalatola8d
    Replied to Howard_Youngblood

    And it will soon become tenfolds complicated, I'm here if you need any explanation

    "There are several versions of myself in this body. Dora is our name, but we use different nicknames between us. I am Sigma, the specialist in abnormal skills, the brain. I am the best character to deal with society. The one who does the daily quests is Gamma, the specialist in general skills and combat genius. He is the one with the greatest offensive power, the one who masters normal magic, but is too dangerous because he could seriously hurt someone. The one you saw today was the worst of us, Beta, the one who had no powers and whose only advantage was being a good son and a good brother to our family. That's literally it, he's a real pain in the ass, he once accepted a girl's confession, and We got caught up in this dating bullshit. Luckily, I managed to get rid of her."
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  • Yalatola
    Yalatola12d
    Replied to CelestialDreamer04

    come on, it's only her and they were very good friends

    "I'm not crying, Idiora, I just got surprised a lot today... You're really back."
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    Yalatola12d
    Replied to CelestialDreamer04

    she's still there, just in her element

    "Say the one who kills monsters when he's not eating or sleeping. If you're so bored what about you go play around with them? I can hear them calling your cute name."
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    Yalatola12d
    Replied to CelestialDreamer04

    very good taste sir

    "Is this really not a joke?... Are you...Are you f-f-f-flirting?"
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    Yalatola12d
    Replied to CelestialDreamer04

    this one won't bother you very long

    "No... Not him... I'm talking about the people inside this other guy."
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    Yalatola12d
    Replied to CelestialDreamer04

    you will love her, 100%, it's not even a possibility

    "You don't know what the system is? Are you playing dumb? What are you trying to pull?"
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  • Yalatola
    Yalatola13d
    Replied to CelestialDreamer04

    true, and her role in this change won't be neglected

    "Why are you even interested in me?"
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