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This is a joke before I get some comments.... lol
I'm not going to lie I agree that these early chapters are really bad ;/ It was my first time writing a bit and I didn't really know what I was doing nor a real plan. Im actually reworking the entire book right now and rewriting all of the early chapters. Sorry for the disappointment
Don't worry... I feel the same if im being honest so I have something else planned for her
Yes she is but he's needed for blackening. That's why I asked in a poll if Erza should be his daughter
Like I said I had planned it both ways and I personally leaned towards erza being his daughter. I see some books do polls at the end of the chapters and only 1 person answers so its gratifying to have done many polls in this book and have all of them responded to with enthusiasm. Thats why I always want to ask your opinions and especially and a big point like a daughter. :)
I don't know why you bothered to read then... It legit said in the description that it was going to have mind control and brainwashing...
No it's Ino
Franceska Mila Rose from bleach
No i'll just make the clone Hanabi disappear like the Mikoto clone that was burned
She's not in this. It's AU....
I'm kinda debating what age I want to have her atm. It's mainly to fit the flow of the story without them being to young as I don't want 12-8 year old's like the original. So I need to give plausible ages that fit and flow with the story so I will decide soon and display it in an upcoming chapter.
I've done both and personally I felt that I couldn't enjoy it as much. Something about blood all over and having to constantly stop to reassure and check on her took a lot out of it. It's a preference thing. I know some people are really into it but it's not so much for me.
No, she is a virgin. I guess I worded it wrong, but I meant that she pulled her shirt down a bit or flirted with him. I might go back and change it as it is easy to misunderstand rereading it.
I thought of this, but he needed to have physical evidence as without that, it would mean he would have to genjutsu teachers, other students, and most likely the anbu watching him due to him being Jinchuriki
Yeah, I felt the same, but I wanted to lay out the story. If this is going to be a long-lasting fic I didn't want to rush it to much
Itachi and Sasuke are not brothers within this AU. Sasuke is Mikoto's brother so Sasuke is actually Itachi's uncle in this.