HambinoRanx
Discord Tag: HambinoRanx Discord Server: https://discord.gg/nfl (Yes it’s a sports server also) Military veteran with an explosive imagination, come join my fave server and learn to write with me.
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HambinoRanx8dReplied to Unit29- HambinoRanx9dReplied to Lucinda_Hacker
Thanks for the all the corrections and sorry as you find them. This was my first attempt at writing about a year ago. Hope you are able to enjoy the story minus the issues
I see the knife coming into view moments from plunging into me when I hear a ringing in my right ear, and instantly, the ground under the man trying to murder me erupted into a rigged pillar shooting him 20-30 feet back. - HambinoRanx9dReplied to Lucinda_Hacker
Thanks that would have been a spelling error on my part. It should be Soul Reathing throughout
Chapter 2 Part 4: Soul Reathing - HambinoRanx15dReplied to Nicoladamyan
- HambinoRanx15dReplied to Nicoladamyan
Oh no worries it’s not at all, I’ve really on used WN to write and stuff like that. I take most of my inspiration for writing from Brandson Sanderson actually lol, he has some great published books around the fantasy scene. If you ever have any questions about the story or its path I’m usually always on discord in between writing. Also out of curiosity who is your favorite characters so far?
- HambinoRanx16dReplied to Nate_Gardea
Interesting thought! You'll have to keep reading to find out. but you are on the right track :)
"Kieran left her room and walked down the big hallway. When she stepped outside, the sky caught her eye. It was an amazing deep purple with lots of stars. She stopped for a second to take it in, then kept going towards the huge coliseum, feeling both nervous and excited." - HambinoRanx18dReplied to Nate_Gardea
Very true, his fear is much shared
Mattison still looked a bit horrified, trying to wrap his head around the concept. Ty couldn't help but think to himself, "Out of everything he could be scared of, zombies?" But not a skeleton... - HambinoRanx18dReplied to Nate_Gardea
It was a place holder while I was doing a mass amount of editing. thanks for finding it! I got it taken care of.
This paragraph has been deleted. - HambinoRanx22dReplied to Draco157
You’re right, thanks for catching this :) I will have it fixed in a timely manner
"They have a powerful head captain among their ranks, who has a strong affinity with time magic and his ability, he created thousands of such devices sharing a small porting of his power with every Angelic warrior or fighter." - HambinoRanx25dReplied to Muze_RionCh 3 Soul's Bargain
- HambinoRanx1mthReplied to Knee_JerkCh 39 Getting Situated
- HambinoRanx1mthReplied to ShdelCh 320 Melina’s Memories (Part 1)
- HambinoRanx1mthReplied to Mob_No_1
Yea becoming complacent is always dangerous
"I can probably cut through the nearby park. Sure, sure, sounds fine by me." - HambinoRanx1mthReplied to Mob_No_1
It’s okay, if you ever get to her growth arc you’ll find out how wholesome she is even more
"I agree for sure. See you soon, Ty. I'll have some steak finished soon, so don't keep me waiting much longer." Jade's voice carried a playful tone before she gave him the sound of a kiss and hung up. - HambinoRanx1mthReplied to COFF33MANIAC
It is Ty's girlfriend, This is from Erebos Perspective.
Just as he was about to step into the portal, he heard the cry of a woman who seemed to be sprinting towards his location. Interest piqued, he turned around and noticed a short woman, around 5'3", dressed in night clothes, having long raven hair and a pale complexion had sprinted and dropped to her knees over Ty's dying body as she cried in pain and tried to get any kind of reaction from him as she shook his body. - HambinoRanx1mthReplied to hot_papichulo
6”2 roughly,
"Because I've grown a bit since becoming a skeleton, and my body has sort of morphed. So, he must have started working on this after I returned," Ty explained. - HambinoRanx1mthReplied to hot_papichulo
Anytime he uses a soul he takes on charactistics on that persons soul for a short time before reverting back.
Unexpectedly, Todd's eyes widened in astonishment as he caught sight of an enlarged version of Ty, his skin now tinted green, contrasting his once pure black complexion. - HambinoRanx1mthReplied to hot_papichulo
Sasuke Mode
Ty queried, "Your former Boss made some intricate hand gestures before lunging at me. Tusandro did something similar before everything went black for me. What's the significance of these characters?"