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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_31mth
    Replied to A_1b_2c_3

    Some things I was wondering about: how long does the halo last when it's activated? I don't remember this being mentioned before. This is something that happens sometimes; at certain moments in the story, there are lots of details (some of which seem quite repetitive), but other simple things are overlooked (like the massacre at the outpost). Then, there's the magic which seems very simple, for physical abilities, it makes sense since they're enhanced movements with mana, but regarding magic, it's almost all magic/arrow, and from what I understood, it's going to be magic/spear later on? Like, where are the fireball or wind blade magic, those basic magic types from magical worlds, you know? And the Blood Drinker ability could be used in her magic training and could also help when Vivian is in her period, right? This way, she wouldn't feel much pain or suffer, while at the same time improving her savage mastery.

    Ch 205 Lady Business No. 3
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    The B*tch In The Fantasy World
    Action · Immortal_Shades
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_31mth
    Replied to Immortal_Shades

    I see, by the way, the status panel was okay in other chapters. Another thing is that the status panel is too extensive; perhaps you should create a separate chapter just for that. So when Vivian improves a mastery, only show the new mastery levels and the status of str, vit, etc. I think it would be much better like this; the way it is now, it kind of seems like half of the chapter is just for the status panel

    Ch 205 Lady Business No. 3
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    The B*tch In The Fantasy World
    Action · Immortal_Shades
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_31mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, also, the status panel is kind of messy. I have some questions, doubts, and maybe tips, can I say?

    Ch 205 Lady Business No. 3
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    The B*tch In The Fantasy World
    Action · Immortal_Shades
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_31mth
    Commented

    Heh, now things are starting to get interesting

    Ch 204 Northwest Exit Outpost
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    The B*tch In The Fantasy World
    Action · Immortal_Shades
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_36mth
    Replied to captain_doge

    he wants gu worm to sell and make money, that's why

    Ch 50 Skillfully earning a fortune. Just a little Ghost Fire Frost
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    Reverend Insanity - Blazing Glory Lightning Brilliance (RI fanfiction)
    Book&Literature · Jaed21
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_36mth
    Commented

    I still don't understand why he jumped off the cliff

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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_36mth
    Commented

    "Generating random items" Of course, it's definitely completely random.

    Ch 3 Itens
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    I Woke Up In Warlock Of The Magus World
    Anime & Comics · aaaaaaaaaawa
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_37mth
    Commented

    I don't really think it's possible to discreetly pluk a strand of hair...

    Ch 16 Integrate
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    Marvel: The Gene Collector
    Movies · Midnight_Wonder
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_37mth
    Commented

    Lol, That was very good

    Ch 107 Tyler Family
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    Warlock of the Magus World – Redux
    Anime & Comics · TunaSandwichAddict
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_39mth
    Commented

    mc conquered the world in 25 chapters, that sure must be a record

    Ch 25 The Master Of Death
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    Desire of Immortality (Harry Potter AU)
    Movies · Tenzing_Choeying_5139
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_39mth
    Commented

    it's very good so far. I just think the story should have more details, like the age of the twins, only in chapter 31 it was said that they were 17 years old, before that I could swear that they were 14 years old at the most

    Ch 33 Chapter 33
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    Forbidden Reliance
    Fantasy · lajistics01
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_39mth
    Replied to XAZVAPB0OTH

    Só to lendo mesmo pelo yuri, sem falar nesses trajes "legais" dela (cringe😲) e a personalidade questionável Oque ferra mesmo é essa segunda personalidade, que nem deve ser isso ( ou talvez seja, mas tipo como que a mc não percebe que não é ela pensando), deve ser na verdade a alma da vampira original e agora tudo indica que deve ser o famoso ancião que guia o seu "sucessor" em seus poderes e também a desculpa esfarrapada para explicar a trama do mundo e como funciona tal coisa

    Ch 9 Harem?
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    The Vampire Queen is Bored
    Book&Literature · Holo_Lover
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_39mth
    Commented

    This whole second personality thing is so bad it's laughable

    Ch 7 Shadows of the Past Part 1
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    The Vampire Queen is Bored
    Book&Literature · Holo_Lover
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_310mth
    Replied to Jaed21

    okay, I think

    Ch 2 I am Mordred Pendragon
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    Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (Re:Zero/Fate fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · Jaed21
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_310mth
    Replied to Jaed21

    which?

    Ch 2 I am Mordred Pendragon
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    Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (Re:Zero/Fate fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · Jaed21
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_310mth
    Replied to A_1b_2c_3

    I particularly liked the fanfics with mc Fang Zheng and Shen Yue

    Ch 2 I am Mordred Pendragon
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    Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (Re:Zero/Fate fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · Jaed21
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_310mth
    Commented

    why write so many fanfics at the same time? this way it shouldn't take long for them to be dropped at the beginning of the story or all have a slow update. although all fanfics are good, the best would be to focus on two at most, one of RI and another of TDG would be perfect

    Ch 2 I am Mordred Pendragon
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    Re:Zero/Mordred Pendragon. King of Lugnica (Re:Zero/Fate fanfiction)
    Anime & Comics · Jaed21
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_310mth
    Replied to Zack_shinigami

    I didn't understand anything, but I agree

    Ch 61 Chapter 61 - Talking To Ava
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    In Marvel as The Hive
    Movies · ZeroX0666
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_310mth
    Replied to Zack_shinigami

    why? the easiest way to have a love interest with Ava is if she becomes physically and emotionally dependent on Lily.

    Ch 61 Chapter 61 - Talking To Ava
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    In Marvel as The Hive
    Movies · ZeroX0666
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  • A_1b_2c_3
    A_1b_2c_310mth
    Replied to Zack_shinigami

    I certainly didn't imagine anything different

    Ch 54 Chapter 54 - First Time
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    In Marvel as The Hive
    Movies · ZeroX0666
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