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Some things I was wondering about: how long does the halo last when it's activated? I don't remember this being mentioned before. This is something that happens sometimes; at certain moments in the story, there are lots of details (some of which seem quite repetitive), but other simple things are overlooked (like the massacre at the outpost). Then, there's the magic which seems very simple, for physical abilities, it makes sense since they're enhanced movements with mana, but regarding magic, it's almost all magic/arrow, and from what I understood, it's going to be magic/spear later on? Like, where are the fireball or wind blade magic, those basic magic types from magical worlds, you know? And the Blood Drinker ability could be used in her magic training and could also help when Vivian is in her period, right? This way, she wouldn't feel much pain or suffer, while at the same time improving her savage mastery.
I see, by the way, the status panel was okay in other chapters. Another thing is that the status panel is too extensive; perhaps you should create a separate chapter just for that. So when Vivian improves a mastery, only show the new mastery levels and the status of str, vit, etc. I think it would be much better like this; the way it is now, it kind of seems like half of the chapter is just for the status panel
I still don't understand why he jumped off the cliff
Só to lendo mesmo pelo yuri, sem falar nesses trajes "legais" dela (cringe😲) e a personalidade questionável Oque ferra mesmo é essa segunda personalidade, que nem deve ser isso ( ou talvez seja, mas tipo como que a mc não percebe que não é ela pensando), deve ser na verdade a alma da vampira original e agora tudo indica que deve ser o famoso ancião que guia o seu "sucessor" em seus poderes e também a desculpa esfarrapada para explicar a trama do mundo e como funciona tal coisa
why write so many fanfics at the same time? this way it shouldn't take long for them to be dropped at the beginning of the story or all have a slow update. although all fanfics are good, the best would be to focus on two at most, one of RI and another of TDG would be perfect