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Very much satisfied with the story I think this novel is really good for you first novel. As for the story , it is good , story is good and has a lot of potential and as of now author is doing a very good job at it As for the mc , he is likable character and has good character development throughout the story , side charectors are good ( mainly male side charectors as female side charectors are not that developed but still relevant), Also mc has a broken plot armour but you should not have a problem with it beacuse this shameless author was always specific about it so it will not come as a surprise and it doesn't affect the story at all also this point is also a point of comedy in the story😂 As for the romance fl is introduced a little late in the story, and the romance is a little slow but it is still developing at a good rate plus fl personality is very good for me So yeah these were my views about this story and I think you should give this a try
Seriously man Lyall doesn't deserve to be in the harem when only one place is left , and she is constantly assaulting him when Ethan doesn't have any interest in her which is annoying The reverse situation of this wouldn't have been taken lightly by many
The world building is much better And I agree with your decision of not adding any power scales to this novel Because tbh , this novel really doesn't need it I have read the story completely it never felt off regarding power scales Doing a good job man with this one