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This book is really good, so I’ll get into what I don’t like about it. First, for me, the updates are too infrequent when considering other webnovels but that’s okay. Another thing is that the other anime and stuff references are super cringey to me and make me want to skip the whole chapter. The mini arcs are also a problem, there are super boring parts spread throughout the story. The chapters of the book itself are really short and even then they’re usually just a whole bunch of yapping. The fights focus on way unnecessary info and can be way shorter just like a lot of story can be compressed into less chapters or make the chapters more succinct and straight to the point rather than wasting over 10 chapters explaining one thing. Another thing is the glazing terms used to many times that are just unnecessary and waste good chapter space. For example, in the recent free chapters of this moment I swear I have gotten annoyed so much at the many descriptions of a character replying in a “kingly voice” 😐. these factors are what I really disgust about the story but overall the book is pretty enjoyable and I’m liking it.
Can you please just tell us if you dropped the novel
Big dubs, actually huge
Here too
Why would you tip him all u your money over something as stupid as pride
No its called Amon
Nah in the beginning sunny said he wasn’ the cause, it was just that he was drawn into the events, not vise versa.
Effie is impressive as always I guess