Yes, but if he hasn't read any other Genshin fanfic, it's the best one in my opinion.

Frederica manipulated the letter and sent another one in Jean's name, so what Kenshin received inside a reddish from Mondstadt was something way different than what Jean wrote. So the answer is obviously different to what it would have been should Jean's letter have arrived untouched.

Proactive is about this chapter, the last ones were a different thing. I already said all I needed to say about the previous ones, so I won't start again with it.

Breezing through Teyvat is the one to go.

Don't think so, she is just too violent to like being on the 'losing' side. And no, before someone else reads this and automatically posts a review saying that 'Kenshin is a masochist and a sub in bed', Kenshin is not going to be on the 'losing side' either.

Yes, it does

Noted. I said 'drunk' as that's the best way to express his absolute lack of any self-control, I would have liked for you to understand that, but okay I guess. The story will turn serious when I need it to be, if you expected it to be serious, well, that's exactly that, only your expectations. But if you are that ashamed, well, there are millions of novels out there where the MC is not as stupid and 'pathetic' as Kenshin is.

hmm well, this chapter was just hated. A pity I wasn't able to explain Kenshin thought process. But I'm past the point of worrying about this, if you didn't like it you can just ignore this chapter (still, Kenshin won't be this bad in the future) or straight up leave if you are unable to do so.

He knew Yae was watching, he has his 'super-vision' (even if he's blind), and there are a lot of things that Arlecchino wouldn't have been able to explain. She still doesn't know a lot of things from Kenshin's ability, like his range, how would she explain Kenshin mysteriously disappearing when Yae was looking? I try to reduce the plot-armor to a minimum

Well, what can I say. A pity, but I understand at some point everyone will find something they won't like, I wish you the best. Thank you for that first review, it made my day.

Nobody said otherwise. But Yae can't interrupt, as the Shrine needs to be neutral as the only party that can stay outside the absolute hegemony the Shogun has. But yes, it's messed up.

Are you sure? I have heard pretty disturbing things drunk people have done. And Kenshin is 'drunk', not of alcohol but he is 'overcharged'. But well, Alrecchino is going to leave pretty soon, if you can't stomach this, there are plenty of novels around

What a non-sensical review, you clearly haven't read it at all. He didn't lose his sight to recover the other's body, but if you didn't get it during the novel, you won't get it now. If even reading the explicit 'NO YURI' I wrote in the synopsis you are still 'not taking any chances', well, better not leave your house because the TV said you live in a peaceful place. I wrote quite explicitly that he will recover his sight, what the f*ck does it mean 'let's suppose not?'. Just like saying Frodo destroyed the ring, but let's suppose not. ??? But well, you do you I guess.

I explained it in the next chapter. Although she is here, her own arc will come in Fontaine, right now is the meeting, the base of their relationship and 'claiming her share' to put it simply. But she will have her moments now.

He only hastened it, Hu Tao would have been the same person she was in canon. Kenshin's presence only made it a few months or at most a year earlier

I have no idea, probably but until now I haven't written an scenario where that was needed. Maybe in the very very far future I will explore that area

He's 'drunk'

He's 'drunk' now, he will calm down a bit

He can indeed fight, I have written a few fights already. But the fic will still be a 'fun' one, although he fights, he won't go smacking everything he sees, he dislikes fighting after all.

In fact, I don't even have instagram, I can only guess 'reels' are the short videos