Rynin
Hi... that's it. The hell are you here for? Move along. Hi though!
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Writing Style... Personally, I think the Author's writing is amazing. The way they write easily shows the Personality of our main character. Other characters aren't bland slates and actually act like their canon selves. The description of areas like the classroom is also very good. Story Development..... So far, so good. During the beginning chapters, the goal wasn't clear but it becomes more apparent later on. Though, I will warn you, it does seem like the Author will branch out to different worlds eventually. Character design... Not much to say in regards to that. I guess you could say the Mc doesn't really have much of a defined appearance. By that I mean it's not mentioned all that much. Updating stability..... I don't feel too worried about it. I assume we'll get a chapter at least every 5 days. Judging form past uploads. World Background...... I gave it 5 stars beacuse the story seems to be headed in the darker places of Hope's Peak. But it does branch out a little. When it comes to other worlds. So, there's not really any extra world Background other than what already exists. Overall..... It's really good. It has a clear direction, fun characters and a nice writing style. Ps: This is important. The Mc has a streamer group chat. As expected, it's people from other worlds. Like spiderman. And it's clear he'll add more people. Perhaps from his own world. Junko may or may not be the love interest. To wrap things up, all I wanna say is, I hope for more chapters. Wonder if the other games will happen.
Oh thanks man. Glad you enjoyed it.
Just noticed your comment. And I guess I'm gonna follow cannon and make it Sasuke. The reason is, I've had some thoughts about doing a Boruto fix which will continue from this. What do you think? PS: I may or may not add a few 'moments' between Sakura and Ino. But nothing too much. Here's a cool image
Hey Author. I think it'll be better for your story if you change it from novel to fanfic. More people will see it that way.
The writing quality has been improving, though I must warn you that there is a lot of shortening of words. An example..... beacuse to cuz. Updates regularly. You don't have to wait many days. Character design, it's not really brought up that much on what the characters look like. Though, we do get a description for our Mc. The World Background isn't really laid out for you. There are hints, as one of the characters mentions villains. Which leads me to believe the world might be like My Hero Academia. Story development, not much to say here other than it seems our main character might end up going against the world. As a villain. However, he himself isn't inherently evil. Unless you count the fact that he's Sukuna. Looks promising. And for any improvements. I'd think it'd be expanding on the other main characters. I also really like the Mc.... As the strongest Curse, Sukuna, fought the cat, Fraud Gege, he began to open his Nah, I'd win. Gege shrunk back in his fear. Then Sukuna said.... "Your name is now Ge/ge!" Time Freeze! "Ahhh." Gege smiled. "My anti- Sukuna technique I haven't used since Kusakabe. This legendary technique is called.....
Say..... I'm sure you're aware of Madara and the Truth Seeking orbs. Eventually, can the Mc do something similar? Or at least add some elements to Hollow Purple? Like instead of being a ball with wind, you can completely change its shape to a line. So you can throw out a line of Hollow Purple like a sword slash. Anyway, good day!
I can see why you think that. But as I stated before, this story will massively change during places like the culling games, or Shibuya. I just released a summary chapter which you can see that Megumi is a lot stronger than he was before. Eventually, all these small things will add up. Sorry if it feels boring.
yeah
Don't mind it. Horrible writing decision I made when I did this.
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