yeah overall the story is fire and is enjoyable I'm just a bit salty after "her" death.

The only thing i don't like about it is that the mc is cold hearted to a degree where its off the charts i like the other characters introduced more then the main character i understand that he's supposed to be smart and analytical but how does not letting anyone into your heart make you intelligent it makes you like madara and we all know how madara ended up. I hope the mc gets a reality check in later chapters or grows as a character.

Thanks for the review the new chapters I'm making will be longer.

I think i'm addicted.

I love the fanfic so much.

Aska is a norweigan girl name so it's odd