Just the thought of Athena successfully attacking him and then, two years later, presenting him with a two-year-old girl with a plump red tail, innocent round golden eyes, shoulder-length reddish-black hair, and a face resembling his own while saying, "My dear Leon, this is our daughter,"sent chills down Leon's spine, causing him to break out in a cold sweat!
"Atom...quite a unique name," the heir remarked, his tone betraying a hint of curiosity. "But I suppose we all have our quirks. Welcome aboard, Atom. I trust you'll prove yourself a valuable addition to our team."
Good start to the novel. The story is blend of mystery, slight romance(currently but probably more in the future), fantasy. The characters in the novel are well developed and not rushed at all. Furthermore, the plot is engaging and I just can’t wait for more chapters to be released.
Story is really wholesome and well written with a very good plot. Brilliant character development and good world-building. It’s an absolute masterpiece!!
I know I’m asking a dumb question but I really need to clarify
(A//N: I know some of y'all gonna ask so I'm gonna answer: No, there won't be any romance between Hyun-Jae and Sophie. It might turn into an interesting friendship, but nothing more than that :). Also, we gonna go back to action in the next chapter finally. Things gonna pick up real quick.)
As in no romance between the two characters themselves or them and talon?
(A//N: I know some of y'all gonna ask so I'm gonna answer: No, there won't be any romance between Hyun-Jae and Sophie. It might turn into an interesting friendship, but nothing more than that :). Also, we gonna go back to action in the next chapter finally. Things gonna pick up real quick.)
No worries. And on the top of my head can’t say anything now about feedback as your doing incredible for a first time writing. All I ask is that you update regularly which you are. 👍👍