Prodigalsaint
he is the way ,the truth and the life..no e shall see the father but through him.
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Prodigalsaint2dCommentedI respect him...most people in real life would cowardly run away...yet this boy possess a boldness.almost no one has.
Lucas tried to take the lead and threw cuts at Helen who easily parried them and moved to the other side.- Prodigalsaint2dCommented
bruh ..I remember og mc beating the guy in the novels extra...
And the body belonged to Lucas as everyone expected. - Prodigalsaint2dCommented
I liked novels extra
"Insight. He had a good insight. He makes his enemy lower his guard with his ordinary presence and then strikes back without giving the other person to retreat." - Prodigalsaint3dReplied to ProdigalsaintCh 3 Childhood beginnings 3.
- Prodigalsaint3dReplied to Xan_cory
thank you for your support...I really appreciate it...in response to your comment...I thank you...but worry not..I am not changing pokemon that much...you'll see...just give me at least 15 chapters. however this will be a unique story..for Eevee..you'll see don't worry about it.give me some time to fully explan. what going before jumping the wagon.. also thank you for answering...I will add more caution..I won't make pokemon unrecognisable..
Ch 3 Childhood beginnings 3. - Prodigalsaint3dReplied to Pratik_Chakraborty_2571
No spoilers
After finishing his breakfast and giving his stepmom a warm hug, Gary bid her farewell and left their home. The Oak family residence was a grand triple-story house with numerous rooms, serving as a home to not only his mother but also his grandfather and father. It had been the Oak family's home for generations but for 3 long years, it was only him in this empty space, him and joy. With enthusiasm, Gary walked in slow steps to the Pokémon research center. He sighed and looked into the sky." - Prodigalsaint4dReplied to Drknzz_333
my bad.spelling error
[Normal Mode] A Pokémon game with reimagined stories and enhanced villains, featuring all Pokémon from Gen 1 to Gen 10. Experience a unique Pokémon journey with manageable battles, engaging challenges, and a focus on building bonds. Ideal for beginners. - Prodigalsaint9dReplied to Prodigalsaint
he calls nurse joy aunty because she's taking care of him..plus he views her like a mother like figure but refers to her as aunty
With his morning ritual complete, Gary swiftly changed into his classic attire, consisting of a purple long-sleeve shirt and black shorts. He dashed down the staircase and into the kitchen, where he heard his mom singing. "Morning, Aunty Joy!" he greeted with a cheerful smile. - Prodigalsaint9dReplied to Morpheus_45368
Gary calls Ash's mom..aunty .
With his morning ritual complete, Gary swiftly changed into his classic attire, consisting of a purple long-sleeve shirt and black shorts. He dashed down the staircase and into the kitchen, where he heard his mom singing. "Morning, Aunty Joy!" he greeted with a cheerful smile. - Prodigalsaint7mthReplied to kekwen24
hey man.the mc is the type of sasuke.that what i meant.that he should not throw his friends.
A headache formed on Austin's head as the crush that Yellow had, was not broken, but he didn't want to be rude, so he replied, "Wow! You look great, Yellow! Very elegant!" - Prodigalsaint9mthCommented
wow.
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i wonder who this kind and wise gentleman is?.he sounds like a chill dude .
Authors note: Hello to you wonderful folks who read this book of mine. I am sorry for the delay as I had some scheduling issues but please be rest assured that I will try to prevent such errors. And also a shotout to the kind gentleman who advised me on the plot. His advice was a much-needed wakeup call for me. Thank you for your time. - Prodigalsaint9mthCommented
Good job.i know it's hard but you need a bare minimum of 2000- 3000 words for a chapter.it's easy to reach 2000 words if you show not tell.Anything less then 2000 is not a chapter. here is a guide on how to show not tell: I want you to place your self in your MC shoes completely and describe what he sees,the action his doing,why his doing it and most importantly build your character,a reader need to tell from the Frist time they are introduced what type of person they are for example Richard on the surface is a sarcastic cold loner with a warm heart,Leon on the surface is an idiot pervert that hides a dangerous personality within,he acts dumb but is actually smart. instead of saying the house was blue and the windows were cracked do this:The walls were a deep ocean blue and the windows were jaded and twisted by the impact of whatever stuck it.its glass fragments scattered across the ground as if the wind were the culprit.(don't go over bored with showing and telling,ya need to balance it out.)
Ch 8 The fight to survive [1] - Prodigalsaint9mthReplied to Brayado_Seg
no yellow's is nothing like this trash in adventure red.
When the man found out, he was unable to control his anger and possessiveness so he locked her up in this hell hole. - Prodigalsaint9mthCommented
i am angry and amused at the same time at you.I was lied too,man I wish i Read the alternative you in another universe that did not do this.
( Author Note: Do you remember when I asked you guys to read chapter 23: Move Combos because I added some extra paragraphs? This chapter is why I did that, get ready for an existential crisis and calling me a sadistic bastard in the comments. Thanks 👍 ) - Prodigalsaint9mthCommented
bro chill.
Hearing Lucario's words, Austin stopped before smirking. - Prodigalsaint9mthCommentedCh 6 Little Red Riding Hood