Monosir
A guy who gives honest feed back and doesn’t hold back at all, but I’m still nice.
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Pretty good. Some spelling mistakes that need to be fixed, but are also rare to find. I mainly found them because I was quite interested at one point. The pace isn’t fast or slow and has a bit of information given at you in the beginning but latter on the execution was much better. Overall a pretty good start.
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*amazing. Hate how auto correct works on this platform
Love the story so far! The pacing is perfect for me and the world and story building is azmazing so far. Though the only problem I had was with Suzume but that’s fine. I’ll keep track of this novel.
Erm, character development for Suzume is kinda bad. Improve it for later chapters
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Pretty good, I just don’t like the use of kanji in the names. Makes it hard to read sometimes. I like some of the romance but I feel like you focus too much on that, But it’s only been 5 chapters so I can’t complain.