This is some great novel, the description and language is easy to follow. The plot seems epic. I'm in love with this mc, he's like me lol. Full of meaningless and stupid ideas.

This was a good chapter 1 on to the next

I guess there are some grammar mistakes.if you find some then pls comment on the paragraph.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

This looks so great as Madara is my one of the favorite villians, got me hooked real good more chapterzz please [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Nice every chapter you are improving and the story is just nice.i recommend to read it.[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins]

Everyday Maximum 3 chapters. I am improving slowly and adding your ideas. [img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins]

Very nice novel 👍 everything looks good.[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

Perfect story nice need more[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

ofc I did it 🤪

Nice story but i can find some issues in the chapter but its overall good and nice keep growing 👍 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Nice story needs little bit of improvement 😀 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

Stroy is so cute and chapters are big everything is nice but still author needs to improve a bit. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Nice One. It needs some improvement overall its goods [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

Nice story needs a lit bit improvement 👌 👏 [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

Nice One. It needs some improvement overall its goods [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Nice need some improvement 👍 [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Its good needs some improvement and the hypnosis sucks sry for saying that my bad [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]

Nice One. It needs some improvement overall its goods [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

Nice One. It needs some improvement overall its goods [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

Nice One. It needs some improvement overall its goods.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]