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Haha, No. In her past life she hated pools and lakes because they were cold and she didn't like swim suits, as well as hating the feeling of being incompetent (unable to swim) She also wasn't athletic, so it was tiering and made her sore and or get sunburned. Verry pessimistic attitude towards all things involving water.
She doesn't know how. That being said she isn't afraid of water and doesn't panic easily. Most people can figure out how to do something that at least keeps them from drowning regardless if those two things are true. She never even bothered to try though because she never felt the need for air that would compel her too.
phantom limb. She won't grow wings. That would require a much greater amount of dragon heart consumption.
nope, permanent status effect. In all fairness all it didn't do all that much aside from making her eyes glow. At least, nothing of note that anyone else will be able to notice.
guess I was thinking about the parkour too much.
XD
Maybe. Note though that when she appears in front of Agis she is still in her body from earth at this point.
My cousin does this too. You are not alone.
Realistically, no, but practically it works. Would she know a term originating from a Japanese war charge in WW2? No. But... They wouldn't be speaking English either. At least probably not. At this point the English term bonsai is just another word in the English language, meaning something completely different than the Japanese "To plant" So it's probably as realistic as any other English word. At least that's kind of how I see it.
This is incredibly ironic to me, because the ' is used to signify possession...
Yea. I usually avoid this. But in this case it's not just a change of volume, but a transition from part 1 (First 3) to part 2- (4-6)
This one kind of trips me up because it feels strange to have a paragraph break withing a quote, but sometimes it also feels like it's worse to just have the one paragraph be massive. I actually didn't know the rules about this, so that's helpful
Dagnit! Fixing now.
There are some things that I just look at... And I'm like... Really? grammar check found nothing wrong with that? Ty
So I thought about this, and I'm pretty sure she's technically been barefoot this whole time. I had to go back to double check, but it never actually talks about there getting shoes, so I think she's technically been barefoot this whole time. Although I'm not sure how much sense that actually makes though so I might go back and change a few things. Or at least clarify that and give a reason for it.
That would have been metal for sure.
it was supposed to be "disinfect" the spell name.