I feel like the mc see Clark only as a machine that gives him points not as a brother it's really unusual because the mc literally grew up with him

This is a good novel so please don't drop this because it's hard to find fanfics that is not trash for me 😭😭

I like this novel please don't ruin this novel with harem and my suggestion is make the mc single or make the a slow pace romance where there is literally no love at first sight or thing like where they just stare at someone and decide she/he is the one for you and do not just focus on the FL also focus on other relationships like friends, teachers, and himself

let me guess Evangeline is the FL

*not

The overall is good but I noticed that you are only focusing on friendship of mc with Harry and Hermione its like you making Ron a background character and going in depth in to his character but the story is good 👍

How do you meet luna and just decided that you will marry her and plan things already and they are just 11 and 10 the mc should have a little childishness

Please update if it is dropped can someone recommend me a fanfic like this one 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

The nara clan here are kinda ooc because they are the type of person who does not like fame cause they find it troublesome and they are lazy.

The nara clan here are kinda ooc because they are the type of person who does not like fame cause they find it troublesome and they are lazy.

You made the mc and her lovers too op they should have some challenges that they will work hard on . .

This is a good fanfic among the Greek fanfic that I've read . . .

Um he is literary the spirit of fun, winter, and children. So why is he having a lover

no harem please 🙏 he is a father who want to save his children from turning into nothingness please focus on that not romance and harem

please do not ship the mc and kushina

I'm kinda disappointed because this is the first idaten fanfic that I read and it is very homophobic I mean who the fuck destroy the city of gays just because they are limiting the reproduction of the human race bitch the city has only less than 10000 people there and why does he have to do that if he is not comfortable with guys then ignore them he does not have to massacre people.

even if your in the sky truck-kun will still struck you

isn't the most a monk why does it have a fl

I think that the mc here is a hypocrite cause he said that all he wants is for the better of azeroth. And author you made a mistake here didn't the the being that the mc have a deal that he must protect azeroth and not let it be corrupted then why did he not stop the the dark gods and if he did not want to stop the dark gods from corrupting it there must be some force that force the mc to do it cause he have a deal with the GOD/DEVIL. I know that because of the fifth element lacking in azeroth cause the mc to be aggressive but he trained his mentality(or the power that the GOD/DEVIL) and he must have some resistance to it. And after he meditate for a million years or some thing he did not even regret it even one time all his thought is about revenge. Didn't he at least have bond with the four elemental king/queen. I just think that it does not make sense and the mc here is just being selfish.

I think that you are only focusing on toph, you should make some bonding with the others so that because I have notice that you are only making scenes about the oc and toph